I stayed up till three thirty reading this excellent little tale. I haven't read many Vegeta stories like this that I know of, and you did great on portraying the two sides of this character. Goku is his usual goofy but good guy self, and the notion of Vegeta's intelligence being undercut by his passion is intriguing. I for one always thought Vegeta was highly intelligent but few writers point that out that he could have some technical brillaince. Thanks for exploring that. You balanced his affection and his evil pefectly.

nice job. cute lil ending. keep up the good work. ^_^

nice job. cute lil ending. keep up the good work. ^_^

lol, that was great! "Cute, was I?" haha! that was really great. you outta do one where goku and vegeta switch bodies...i know someone who has but i can't remember who...once again, this was great!

Wow, Evil Vegeta needs him mouth washed out. Sorry, I'm a goody-goody. lol. anyway, I'm glad the Nice Vegeta is okay. He's great. I can't wait for the next chapter!

not bad. i like it the same as the first time you wrote this.

very nice, very nice

this is the first chapter to a fic that i've read in a long long time. i haven't been to the site in months. lol. like you, i haven't written anything either in a while *sweatdrop*

please update soon. ^_^

Nice Vegeta steps up! now, that's the Vegeta i know. oh, don't stop. this was plenty long but you still hafta update!

omg this story is amazing... but garlic jr. should be in it because he is so cute.. and he turns so sexy when he's older! keep on writing, you're awesome!

this is really good so far. i hope u update soon. I mean, i really REALLY hope.

HAHA! Evil Vegeta got whooped by trunks! It just shows how WEAK he is! *laughs like a maniac and runs off*

LOL! i HAD to read this again! I already read it at your house, but i wanted to leave you a review too! WONDERFUL story!

Nice! It's awesome to see one of my fics finally update after months of waiting!

I ilke the deipction of the nicer version of vegeta, and I find evil vegeta amusing. Maybe that's because everytime i read something with him takling, I think of the old veegta from the beginning of the series. heh heh. I haven't watched DBZ is AGES...

Well, keep it up, and update soon! ^_^

I have a story kinda like this one that i'm doing right now. It takes place in the begining of the buu saga. The problem is that the evil side is too strong to stop and so on, and so on and so on. 29 chatpers so far. Okay enough about me. Your details are good and the behavior of the Z-fighters are believeable. But, you might want to try bolding or somthing diffenet with thoughts of people in here. this is in no way a cut down. just a thought.
Okay bye-bye, now ;)

hey, when did you start writing again?
Anyway, I like this version, and I will definately be reading more. ^_^
Update soon!