   tapion580 4/3/12 . chapter 8I really liked this story, very well made! I love it! Well do e my friend! Whoops I spelled done wrong Lolz... |
| Majin Ariana 2/6/12 . chapter 8 I love the ending. It's like two conflicting sides of him so... at one moment its that fuckin predictable wench think she can call me cute on the other hand...I am pretty cute... |
| jessi 10/30/11 . chapter 8 Great story, very funny! |
| Trynia Merin 3/14/07 . chapter 8 I stayed up till three thirty reading this excellent little tale. I haven't read many Vegeta stories like this that I know of, and you did great on portraying the two sides of this character. Goku is his usual goofy but good guy self, and the notion of Vegeta's intelligence being undercut by his passion is intriguing. I for one always thought Vegeta was highly intelligent but few writers point that out that he could have some technical brillaince. Thanks for exploring that. You balanced his affection and his evil pefectly. |
| wind2 6/6/05 . chapter 8 nice job. cute lil ending. keep up the good work. _ |
| wind2 6/6/05 . chapter 8 nice job. cute lil ending. keep up the good work. _ |
| East-Coast-Invictus 6/3/05 . chapter 8 lol, that was great! "Cute, was I?" haha! that was really great. you outta do one where goku and vegeta switch bodies...i know someone who has but i can't remember who...once again, this was great! |
| East-Coast-Invictus 5/15/05 . chapter 6 Wow, Evil Vegeta needs him mouth washed out. Sorry, I'm a goody-goody. lol. anyway, I'm glad the Nice Vegeta is okay. He's great. I can't wait for the next chapter! |
| DARK KI A.K.A. LEE 5/4/05 . chapter 6 not bad. i like it the same as the first time you wrote this. |
| Wind2 5/3/05 . chapter 6 very nice, very nice
this is the first chapter to a fic that i've read in a long long time. i haven't been to the site in months. lol. like you, i haven't written anything either in a while *sweatdrop*
please update soon. _ |
| East-Coast-Invictus 6/21/04 . chapter 5 Nice Vegeta steps up! now, that's the Vegeta i know. oh, don't stop. this was plenty long but you still hafta update! |
| i love trunks especially wood ones 6/21/04 . chapter 4 omg this story is amazing... but garlic jr. should be in it because he is so cute.. and he turns so sexy when he's older! keep on writing, you're awesome! |
| East Coastie1500 6/21/04 . chapter 4 this is really good so far. i hope u update soon. I mean, i really REALLY hope. |
| again you know who i am 6/4/04 . chapter 3 HAHA! Evil Vegeta got whooped by trunks! It just shows how WEAK he is! *laughs like a maniac and runs off* |
| you know who i am 6/4/04 . chapter 2 LOL! i HAD to read this again! I already read it at your house, but i wanted to leave you a review too! WONDERFUL story! |
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