 Kameka 2003-12-30 . chapter 1Wonderful continuation, Chicmns :) You're welcome and I'm honored that you used my story as a platform for it!
It's just how I see Cliff and Taylor interacting ... when they get along, that is! Dan being invited for Christmas was great too, as he doesn't seem to have any family/close family. I can totally see him teasing Zoe at work about falling asleep on his shoulder. Do you plan on continuing your story in any way?
I had only one minor nitpick there... Cliff's not a Junior yet lol he goes to the same school as Hannah, not Taylor and, based on the episode where Taylor ran away, he's not even a teenager yet. (Zoe asked Marcos if it was possible Cliff and Hannah could skip the teenage stage.)
It's great to see you in the fandom - not only because it needs authors but also because you're a good one.
Keep writing!
Kam |