|Reviews for The Peace of a Child|
| janette 10/16/12 . chapter 1
can't say anything else other than it was absolutely precious
| sunnyplace123 11/9/08 . chapter 1
Hooray for good Ken! I love stories that play up Ken and Wormmon's newly founded friendship! I like the part where he played soccer with the little kids. Well, keep up the good work!
| Sugarette 1/27/07 . chapter 1
Kawaii story! Very Cute! Running out of Ways to say Cute.
Also, I LOL'd at Davis' Line.
| cenkantra 7/2/06 . chapter 1
No you won't.
( Bite me. )
- sigh -. Girgash opened this review early. We're finding typos as I read, and he wants to put them all here.
( She said she wanted criticism. )
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"The reality was a breathtaking."
( It should be: 'was breatktaking', or 'a breathtaking one'.)
"...desks doing busywork."
( What, in Heaven's name, is 'busywork'?. It should be: 'desks, busy doing work'.)
" *Free!* he exulted "
( FFn review bot may delete the asterisks in the quote, but it doesn't make a difference. 'exulted' should be 'exclaimed', or something like that. Also, it would have been a good idea to make the first 'Free!' a spoken sentence, and the second 'Free!' a thought: Ken's reinforcing his declaration. )
"... some portable food items... "
( Wow. Where have you ever seen 'unportable' food? )
At my house. Usually, at around dinner.
( It's called Tupperware, Dragonclaw. And it's from your memory, so you should know. )
( Okay: Once again, a very good story. Full marks on the 'Maturity Scale'. Even a non-Digimon fan would appreciate this fic. )
I'm guessing this particular author reads alot.
( I think you may be right. )
Heh: Ken's day out reminded me of the times I used to sneak away from school.
( What was your record? Three days a week for a month? )
| CandyGirl999 12/2/05 . chapter 1
This is by far the most CUTEST Ken/Wormmon fic Ive ever read. You know somthing like this sould have been put in the series, I mean it; just a nice episode of Ken and Wormmon spending time together - dont stop writing!
| Gelendra 10/17/05 . chapter 1
Aww! this was so cute, and fluffy, and perfect! Just the thing I was needing to read. thanks!
| Vestque the Artist 7/18/05 . chapter 1
Extremely cute and beautifully written. Keep up the good work :)
Vestque of Enchantments
| Yami Vizzini 7/17/05 . chapter 1
Would this come after The Vigil, or be in continuity with the show? Never mind; I think it would work either way. Anyway, I'm happy for Ken, and a bit surprised that young Darrel managed to beat him in the soccer game. Eh, the former Emperor could use a bit of humbling. Great job!
| blasw 12/25/04 . chapter 1
WHAT TALENT WORK!
It did warm my heart though I am a Kaiser fan..
May I translate it into Chinese?(my mother tongue)
| takuya 12/12/04 . chapter 1
aww that was so cute i really loved it tons
| Nireya 8/30/03 . chapter 1
O It's very beautiful 33!
I read your history, althought I need the dictionary for tnaslate some words 33
I repeat that I like this history . You must continue in that way O
PD: I'm from Spain ._. Sorry!
| heath 999 6/8/03 . chapter 1
Really cute story! I loved it!
| Izzy41630 5/30/03 . chapter 1
| Amber 12/11/02 . chapter 1
What a sweet story!
| Kenshin Himura 8/10/02 . chapter 1
Aww... very cute! One of the few stories without the gay relationship between Davis & Ken. _* I'm getting tired of those stories, eck! *cringes* I hope you right another cute Ken ficcie! _