Hooray for good Ken! I love stories that play up Ken and Wormmon's newly founded friendship! I like the part where he played soccer with the little kids. Well, keep up the good work!

_sunnyplace123_

Kawaii story! Very Cute! Running out of Ways to say Cute.

Also, I LOL'd at Davis' Line.

No you won't.

( Bite me. )

- sigh -. Girgash opened this review early. We're finding typos as I read, and he wants to put them all here.

( She said she wanted criticism. )

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"The reality was a breathtaking."

( It should be: 'was breatktaking', or 'a breathtaking one'.)

"...desks doing busywork."

( What, in Heaven's name, is 'busywork'?. It should be: 'desks, busy doing work'.)

" *Free!* he exulted "

( FFn review bot may delete the asterisks in the quote, but it doesn't make a difference. 'exulted' should be 'exclaimed', or something like that. Also, it would have been a good idea to make the first 'Free!' a spoken sentence, and the second 'Free!' a thought: Ken's reinforcing his declaration. )

"... some portable food items... "

( Wow. Where have you ever seen 'unportable' food? )

At my house. Usually, at around dinner.

( It's called Tupperware, Dragonclaw. And it's from your memory, so you should know. )

( Okay: Once again, a very good story. Full marks on the 'Maturity Scale'. Even a non-Digimon fan would appreciate this fic. )

I'm guessing this particular author reads alot.

( I think you may be right. )

Heh: Ken's day out reminded me of the times I used to sneak away from school.

( What was your record? Three days a week for a month? )

Bad stomach.

This is by far the most CUTEST Ken/Wormmon fic Ive ever read. You know somthing like this sould have been put in the series, I mean it; just a nice episode of Ken and Wormmon spending time together - dont stop writing!

Aww! this was so cute, and fluffy, and perfect! Just the thing I was needing to read. thanks!

Extremely cute and beautifully written. Keep up the good work :)

Vestque of Enchantments

Would this come after The Vigil, or be in continuity with the show? Never mind; I think it would work either way. Anyway, I'm happy for Ken, and a bit surprised that young Darrel managed to beat him in the soccer game. Eh, the former Emperor could use a bit of humbling. Great job!

WHAT TALENT WORK!

It did warm my heart though I am a Kaiser fan..

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May I translate it into Chinese?(my mother tongue)

aww that was so cute i really loved it tons

O It's very beautiful 33!

I read your history, althought I need the dictionary for tnaslate some words 33

I repeat that I like this history . You must continue in that way O

PD: I'm from Spain ._. Sorry!

Really cute story! I loved it!

AWESOME!

What a sweet story!

Aww... very cute! One of the few stories without the gay relationship between Davis & Ken. _* I'm getting tired of those stories, eck! *cringes* I hope you right another cute Ken ficcie! _

Okay, this isn't fair. I slog through fanfics that look like a two-year old was ventng frustration on a keyboard, and I'm forced to point out the very obvious flaws in their work. Then a brilliant author like YOU comes along, and I'M the one that feels like a babbling idiot when I review. I'm sorry, but I just can't write a review to do this work justice. So I won't even try to highlight the compassion that flowed between these partners, the joy you managed to convincingly portray, or even the little details, like Ken's gift to Wormon. I'm simply not good enough. Sorry. :(