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Tilius
2007-04-18
ch 19,
abuseGreat story.
amy
2006-03-21
ch 19, anon.
abusehiya is jondy and zack a couple
Astra
2004-09-17
ch 19, anon.
abuseGreat story Be Borin. Loved it as I do all your stories. I'm realltglad you are working on a nest story about Kay. can't wait to see the first chapter.
Astra
2004-09-17
ch 18, anon.
abuseSeems like a good idea, Kiera helping Shayna out. Still i think it's sad though that Shayna and Ben can't raise their baby together.
Astra
2004-09-17
ch 17, anon.
abusepoor Jondy having nightmares, as if being back in Maticore for a littlw while wasnt eough of a nightmare.
Astra
2004-09-17
ch 17, anon.
abusepoor Jondy having nightmares, as if being back in Maticore for a littlw while wasnt eough of a nightmare.
Astra
2004-09-17
ch 15, anon.
abuseFeelings, all tos efeelings,, so sweet and you built them all so subtle in thr story. great job.
Astra
2004-09-17
ch 14, anon.
abuseLots of action, great chapter.
Astra
2004-09-17
ch 13, anon.
abuseAww Poor jondy, Killing Eva will be so ** her. I hope they all get out.
Astra
2004-09-17
ch 12, anon.
abuseThis s all very confusing. But interesting.
Astra
2004-09-17
ch 11, anon.
abuseTook me some time to catch up with your story but I will finish it now!
Astra
2004-09-17
ch 11, anon.
abuseTook me some time to catch up with your story but I will finish it now!
ZombieGurl98
2004-08-20
ch 19,
abuseOmg, its over... I love it. It was wonderful.
Rose
2004-08-20
ch 19, anon.
abuseSequel? Please? Pretty please with a cherry on top? Loved this one so much, really-it's so sad it's over. Really I just loved seeing that you up-dated and then reading a great chapter. Marvelous! Fantastic! Go Girl! Please consider a sequel and good luck with the next story you will be writing. I'm sure it will be great.
-Rose
Senorita-DLH
2004-08-19
ch 19,
abuseYeah! I love it! I just love Zack and Jondy stories, almost as much as I love Max/Alec stories. Think I may have to try writing a Z/J one myself once I'm finished with the M/A I'm currently working on.

Thanks for writing this.
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