It´s a long time since you updated this story. I hope you continue this.

when you get the chance please update this story.

plese i am beging you up date this story

interesting story, I really like it lol. I hope you choose to continue it in the near future.

Wow...

I have to say that you are one amazing writer. I'm not normally a person who would read a story like this after the first chapter, but the situation that you awoke in your writing grasped my attention like very few stories were ever able to. I congratulate you for writing this superb story.
I noticed that you haven't updated this in quite a while, so I was wondering if you were going to continue writing this story, or if it is dead. (I'm certainly hoping you'll keep writing it.)

O.O! Bad Shinobu. Update soon.

Update update update

Plz update this story!

plz update this story!

good story, keep up the good work and update soon!

This is a very unique fic, to say the least. I agree with Demon King; Shinobu's character is just too... fluctuating? I think this would make a good dark fic, maybe a tragedy-- but in either case, more exploration on Keitaro and Shinobu's character would make this even better!

Nice chapter hope to see another soon.

Wow, there were updates to this story? How did I miss THAT??

Anyway, this is a very good story, but there seems to be emotional inconsistency regarding Shinobu. It seems as though she went from threatening Dominatrix to a housewife in the span of 4 chapters.

It's still very good, but the inconsistency is kind of strange. You seemed to have kept everything else in order, though. Great work!

Okay some backstory gets filled in and we start to see the genesis for Shinobu's walk into the Twlight Zone. I'll be interested to see how this plays out

no new thoughts, just wanted to complement you on your seemingly though out story. where have you been all this time? did ur comp break like mine?