Did you just trip over a sheep?

Maybe

I love that! My room mate actually came to check on me as I was laughing so hard! That was great!

So far I'm loving this story. The only thing I've noticed is this chapter (and maybe a bit of the last one), none of the dialogue is in quotations so it makes it a bit confusing. You know, figuring out when and where the dialogue starts and stops. Other than that, good work. And yes, you need to do something for you YST fans too! I've run out of things to read there, so on to new stuff! lol

Moonlight

“I don’t doubt that, sir,” Harry said, grinning as a steaming plate of scrambled eggs, and bacon was placed before him (with a side order of buttered toast, potato fritters, and fresh apple slices with mint garnish).

why haven't you given whole menu?

oh my i lost track of the time trying to read finish and finally i have. You have amazing potential as a writer and a creator. simply genius...

p.s. lol harry wanted to run away together with snape...haha imagine what would dumbledore tell ron and hermione and the rest of hoghwarts - excuse me everyone i have something to announce.our dearest potions master have currently took off with the boy-who-lived.perhaps it would be in our best interests to ally with voldemort in a search team for the two most wanted people in the entire wizarding world. oh, and do please try your best to find them before voldemort , seeing as he will decapitate them on spot if he comes across them before we do. ROFL.

Amazing fanfic... really and a beautiful ending, nearly heartbrooken. I really like the final hug between the two of them. But you can't let this story here! you have to make a sequel! Come on! you can do it!
i really loved how Harry saved Severus' live, it's an amazing moment. I was listening the BSO of Sunshine (the surface of the sun) and it was like the perfect song for the special moment.
you should listen it.

Congratulations again!

loved this story

great ending..leaves you open for a sequal!

well u had me worried there for a bit

thankfully you didn't let severus die..wow



oh your quote marks are still missing even through to this chapter

m poor severus still hurting

and your missing quote marks

all your quote marks and such are missing in this chapter

just thought i would tell you

weewh thankfully snape survived..that was intense :D

I enjoyed the natural pace of the story, and was quite choked up at the end-thanks for a great story, and a sequel would not be unwelcome! (Just so you know, Weasley doesn't require an apostrophe to become plural :) )

I'm simply letting you know that in chapters 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, and 17 all have the same lack of quotation marks. I was very confused and frustrated about this until I realized that it must be an error, and as such, I am reporting it to the amazing author...as I like your story otherwise. :)

~ Athene

Oh gods above and below. What a beautiful story. The ending was absolutely breath-takingly beautiful.

I must admit that when I first read this story, I was none too impressed. The beginning felt entirely like too many others, and lacked a certain personality. In short I read it simply becuase I was bored and liked the prose a bit more than some of the other things I was going through. I can't recall whether I abandoned this after I stepped away from my machine or simply never came back to it after update.

But having reread the beginning and the story in its entirety, I must say that I do love the focus on Severus and Harry, the character interaction and development. The last seven chapters or so were absolutely wonderfully written and were not content in merely telling a story but forced the reader to feel; it literally tore the emotions from the heart.

While I still think that the beginning is weak, and I puzzle over what has become of certain charcters, I realize that the focus was supposed to remain on Severus and Harry. As such perhaps you should not have introduced Leonora Cowe or given her and Severus such an extensive background. Although, or perhaps in spite of, by the end of the story we've near about forgotten her, becuase of the strong focus on Harry and Severus' relationship.

Thank you for writing this; it was such a joy to read, and then was well worth it.

Wow. That was quite a journey. Yours is an excellent story that I very much enjoyed. The last chapter just broke my heart.

Excelent story. One of the best on ff about Snape/Harry friendship. And so many hurt/comfort...but i like it:-)THX SO MUCH:-)
You fan from Czech republic