ah please make paragraphs more often, it's hard to read!

aw! it's a real shame this was never continued... it was an interesting idea!

it is very good. Does Mr. Minchin sexually harass them or is the school just really bad?

Great first two chapters! Hope to see more soon! ~Melissa~

Hey there!! My name is Sadira!! How are you? Good I hope. I LOVE writing AIW stories too, but mine are a little different. AIW for me is “Adventures in Wonderland

I think a cute name for this story would be "A Little Queen." A statement at the breakfast scene gave me this idea and the story is similiar to Sara in "A Little Princess." Just an idea...
A Big Fan of Yours

I love this story! I know it's been i while since you wrote it, but PLEASE write more!
~ Curly Q

This chapter points to a story that will be highly enjoyable to read. Isabel is an enchanting character, that reminds me a lot of Sara. I can't wait to see what happens next!