   starryeyes10 2008-04-19 . chapter 8great story |
 SpaceMonkey0941 2007-01-19 . chapter 8wow, what a great story! I totally love it! interesting ending, I never expected sam to be the one to give up the military.
great 'ficlet, loved it! |
| monstermunch3435 2006-03-10 . chapter 8 great story!! |
| JamSack at ff.net 2005-08-26 . chapter 8 But they've been married for years so it worked out okay. He was a bit hesitant in asking her the second time, but for a middle-aged couple they really are sweet. Plus they have a son who's just about my age! He's quite good looking lol!
May I say it again. A stupendous story! |
| JamSack at ff.net 2005-08-26 . chapter 8 A great story!! I loved it! And I think the scrabble thing is a great idea! I know a friend of the family who asked his girlfriend to marry him by spelling out the words 'marry me' on the scrabble board. Cliched and corny, but it was really sweet! It's a shame that she didn't notcie because he had to cheat to get the right letters! Scrabble is good when using it like that, i don't like playing it otherwise! |
| NG 2004-02-20 . chapter 8 Hey it was sweet. Okay granted not totally the chapter I was looking for but still terrific.
Well Done! |
| the female apophis 2004-02-19 . chapter 8 YAY!
well, i loved it.
it was a bit of a cliche, but i don't mind!
can't wait to see what your next brilliant idea is!
much love to ya! |
| Cathain Nottingham 2004-02-19 . chapter 8 Yay! It's true that it was an abrupt ending but it was a great one nonetheless :) You had me laughing when Jack is trying to run his "hypothetical" question by Hammond and I loved Sam's line of "I'm glad I have permission to be with Daniel. That's just what I've always wanted." This is such a great series that I'm sad to see it go but at the same time happy because of the "happy" ending. This was a terrific series, be very proud of youself :) |
| The Twilight Writer 2004-02-19 . chapter 8 Aw...that was so cute!
And different, most people who do one of them becoming a civillian have Jack becoming one...it was a nice change. :D
~The Twilight Writer |
| Mara Jade Jedi 2004-02-19 . chapter 8 OOH! nice ending!
And it is fairly realistic! Not 100% foolproof, but it was well written and was a nice, happy shipper ending, which is allways good!
Well done! Lots of computer chocolate and praise for you methinks! :D
I could sing cheesy cliff richards songs if you like "Congratulations, and jubilations..."
or not.
Well done! :D |
| Sci Fi Fan Gillian 2004-02-19 . chapter 8 Great chapters. |
| charlie-sjer 2004-02-18 . chapter 7 Looking forward to the next chapter, although I'm sad it will be the last. |
| Horsefly 2004-02-17 . chapter 7 Ah! what's his idea. PPLEASE udate soon! |
| Horsefly 2004-02-17 . chapter 6 Yes, I'm ending it there for now. And it's really short.. And I'm sure you all hate me.. Yes we do! Ah well I forgive u. |
| Horsefly 2004-02-17 . chapter 5 AH! How could u leave us like that! I really like your story I didn't think you were ever going to update. |
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