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| fallenangell 2005-11-29 ch 1, | abuseWow that was really good! There was so much emotion envoked in that and it was so perfect! Defintely one of the best things I've read on this site! |
| Morgan Stuart 2004-12-13 ch 1, | abuseSimply wonderful. Masterful characterizations, moments that will haunt me. Great descriptions: "It’s in these moments that his flame burns bright, that she can see the diamond inside of him, each facet flashing hot." Lovely. Please write more - I want to see these characters through your eyes! Thank you for sharing this story with us. |
| vega rin 2004-01-04 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful, meticulous and well, amazing. I absolutely agree with the idea of Evie being their anchor for sanity. Both Paul and Alva need her desperately and she's bound by that need. I've always found Evie to be a fascinating character, and it killed me that the show has ended before we get to really know her. So I'm ecstatic to find such gems with excellent characterization on everyone and insights on Evie. And the writing itself is truly flawless. Thank you for the delightful read. |
| lizangel22222 2004-01-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love the writing style. I can't really describe it, but it does really well with this piece. And usually when there is not much dialogue, the story strikes me as boring and hard to follow... But, the sparse use of dialogue, again, does really well here. There is a certain mood of hopelessness in the way this is written that I just love. Honestly, I think this story is absolutely perfect. Thanks for giving me a good read. I hope to see more Miracles fan fiction from you. |