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cirana 2007-06-07 . chapter 1
gd fic
Rebel Goddess 2006-06-05 . chapter 1
Poor Sam but her predicament made me laugh, as did Daniel's survival instincts working for once and the bit about them disembowelling the watchers in their sleep.
katie 2005-06-30 . chapter 1
HA! That ending made me laugh right out loud...my family is looking at me like im crazy

Interesting, they never deal with this problem in any tv shows
technetium 2005-04-17 . chapter 1
Poor Sam. I sympathize.
ismisesteph 2004-08-03 . chapter 1
ROTF
This was excellent.
I know exactly that situation: Witnness (big rock concert), went with three guy friends and two girl friends, camping out for the weekend, lost my girlfriends, hadn't taken a wizz for half a day, and couldn't see any toilets. Let's just say, my guy friends were surprisingly supportive, but spoiled the effect by giggling constantly for the rest of the weekend, lol
Anyway great story, writing any more?
HyperCaz 2004-03-05 . chapter 1
lol! i love your stories! fresh and funny
selori 2004-01-19 . chapter 1
Nicely done! And a good way to bring up a subject that really doesn't get handled... ever... OK, except maybe in Tom Clancy novels. :-)
Good characterizations of each member of the team. Sam definitely sounds like Sam.
doesitsaycolonel 2004-01-05 . chapter 1
Well what can you constuctively criticise about with regards to peeing..your story was such a lot more than that! I love reading shorts that have some personal history in them as it really shows!The longest Ive ever saved was 6 hrs stuck in traffic on the M6. Could hardly walk.Looking forward to reading more! Catching up with your stories now...
Louise
youngest knight 2004-01-02 . chapter 1
Try a 15 hour car ride over badly-paved roads where the only stop is a nasty trucker bathroom,and when you get home you have to wait an hour for the house to be aired out! I feel Sam's pain.
I knew I was gonna like this story as soon as I read the summary. If this is a slightly personal story, I'm glad you had the guys there. Camping trips suck when they aren't the least bit helpful. Thanks for this one, I was laughing so hard that my parents came into my room to see if I was ok.
megan 2004-01-01 . chapter 1
That was one of the funniest things i have ever read in my life! And yes...there never does seem to be a toilet around when you need one, but there is always a free urinal.
Kat_Hawke 2004-01-01 . chapter 1
Very Ingenious. Never would've thought of that.
Gimli2003 2004-01-01 . chapter 1
I never thought of that, poor Carter! Great stuff Mara :)
me 2004-01-01 . chapter 1
I've so been there!! I've been on a few camping trips with nothing but guys! I hate peeing in the woods! The sad thing is I can hold it for 17 hours easy because of it, always waited till the guys were asleep to use the bush ;)
Holly Matteson 2003-12-31 . chapter 1
Interesting, to say the least.
Cairis Rin 2003-12-31 . chapter 1
Oh my goodness that was absolutely hilarious! I was practically falling out of my chair I was laughing so hard. And you story makes a good point, we *haven't* seen any toilets in their cells, not even the ones in the SGC. lol. This was a fantastic bit of humour! :D
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