A little too wordy at times. needs better fluidity of speech. Too much fluctuation in the past, present, or future tenses. Very interesting story. Well put together. Needs conclusive ending

ONE OF THE MOST AWESOME STORIES ON THE SITE!YOU HAVE GOT AN AWESOME IMAGINATION!I LOVE THIS STORY MORE THAN WORDS CAN DESCRIBE!LOVE IT!!

Dude, this had to have been one of the more creative stories I've ever read. I offer my Kudos to you.

I can't believe what an amazing story that was! There are no words...seriously. You nailed all the characters and had me on the edge of my seat the whole time. That was AWESOME! :)

AH! Batman can't be gone! This better be cleared up in the monlogue or I'll cry!

I don't even know what to say...OMG

I'm seriously about to kick that guys **.

I reiterate: HOLY CRAP

Did NOT see that one coming! Not for million billion miles! YOU'RE GOOD!

OMG I have no idea what's going on. That Slade is one crazy mofo. Must...keep...reading...

HOLY CRAP

That was great! The kiss totally made up for the BM/WW drama. Will Batman ever learn?

YES! I ** LOVE BATMAN!

Anywho, nice turn of events! ;) I knew he'd think of something.

LOL! Hawkgirl is going to beat the crap outta boy! That chapter had me laughing so hard I almost fell out of my chair! Anywho, all these integrated characters are so exciting! I hope SS turns out to be a good guy later!

Gasp!

I should have seen that coming! Argh!! Stupid Slade and his stupid not-Slades.

OMG! Slade must die!