   OriginalCeenote 2006-07-15 . chapter 3I loved this line in chapter one: “I’ll go get my ** kicking boots, then”
That was too cool. I can imagine Logan in an X-men based fic muttering something like that! Food for thought, eh?
I would change "electromagnetism" to "electromagnetic energy," it makes it sound more relevant in the context you are using it in. Other than that, this is a great story. I like Shalimar waking up in Emma's bed with her guest, since the mental image I get makes me laugh...good work. |
| sclub 2005-03-16 . chapter 3 Interesting, would love to see how this ends :) |
 SynergyFox 2004-05-14 . chapter 3Write more... that is a very interesting topic... I mean the whole Emma Shalimar switch, is genius really. That was funny how the others didn't belive Shalimar was Emma and Emma was Shalimar... |
| The Faerie Enchantress 2004-04-01 . chapter 3 oh, what's next? |
| bri 2004-02-06 . chapter 3 i love it i love it i love it , the story is great and i love bren/shal! this story has a really good plot and please update soon! please and thank you bye bye! :) |
| LoveConquers 2004-02-06 . chapter 3 This is excellent!! I love it!! I'd like to see a scene with Shalimar sensing Brennan's feelings towards her!
You are going a great job, I can't wait to read more!! Thank you! |
| Katianna 2004-02-06 . chapter 3 This is a cool story. I've done betaing for a few people and would be happy to do yours, just email me. :D |
| Nicki 2004-02-05 . chapter 2 Wow .. I like the twist! How will Emma cope with Feral strength, o loving it |
| psionic-sweety 2004-01-16 . chapter 2 Luving your story, hope you update soon!! also luving the JE! Is there gonna be any BS?!?!?! I'd love it if there was! Can't wait for more! |
| LoveConquers 2004-01-14 . chapter 2 Oh, this is such a fun story, I can't wait for the next update!! Thank you!! |
| PeTiTeCaT 2004-01-14 . chapter 2 Yay! ff.net is finally working! Glad to see you added more, and I can't wait for more again lol. Great chapter! |
| Empath-Child 2004-01-14 . chapter 2 keep going :)I like it, but I already said that :) |
| Shado-Fox 2004-01-14 . chapter 2 Yeah! Good story! I'm very interested to see what will happen to Shal(Emma) and Emma(Shal)! Please update soon :) |
| goldstranger 2004-01-13 . chapter 2 Wait a minute, you said unconscious Emma (who is really Shalimar inside) but what happened to Shalimar (Emma inside)? you didn't say what happened to her.
Ok my only complaint is that this was short. |
| canadian-chic14 2004-01-13 . chapter 2 I think you're doing great, the first fic is always the hardest. Love the story hope you update soon. |
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