that was great. do you really have a girlfriend? anyways, i hope to hear more action and lemon and limes. i never read stories from guys before and reading yours, i see that they are really good at writing them. great job. i love it

-mei mei

Love it lots. Very indepth thought and very sweet.

I love it! Sick in a way maybe, but just lovely.

aw, it's so cute

I love it..

Wow...that was...

Good story.

Wow...I really liked this chapter it was dark and had a bitter sweet depth to it. I love the way that you interpreted Sasuke and his feelings for Sakura. In the way that his character was crafted, you created something that is not all that farfetched. He needs to restore the clan and it is believable that he would use Sakura if only for that reason, even if he does love her. I really hope that everyone appreciated this as much as I did, but then again I like those dark, morbid, bitter-sweet stories. I'll read the next chapter when I have more time, but for now keep up the good work.

well if he cares about her so much why does he have to leave? Won't he come back anyway. He would take care of his own child.

that was beautiful, i enjoyed that very much, thank you for writing it, keep up the good writing

Loved the Lee Musings chapter. I think he is a cool character that doesn't get all the atention that he deserves. Very IC. Congratulations

Bravo. Your writing style is so good, this was a pleasure to read.

Liked both chapters - they're a bit different from the norm, in fact they're very different!

*sniffles and claps* Good jobby... *sniff* Good jobby

this is great i love this last sentence! its the best ever!

Good... not a big fan of Rock Lee thoguh ;