NO! This can't be! what? (sobbing) im so sad but it's such a good story! Keep writing!

Hey! You wrote too well, and I'm jealous...
Just kidding! Yukiru's part of my live now and I demand you to update as soon as possible. Ha...Ha...

Well,your stories going great. You can be a novelist just like Shigure(and I mean it!)
Thanks for your story, anyway.

No offense to Tohru, but she really is an idiot if she can't tell what Yuki was going to say to her.
That boy needs to write a love letter to her.

Update and put chapter 6 already please! ^_^

this chapter was really good even though it is sad, i hope you can get her out of the contract, And those annoying cheerleader girls really made me mad, Yuki was just about to admit his feeling and they ruined that chance.
But anyway update soon for all your fans!

dat was so sad a big misunderstanding, well the chapter was really good!
(well i betta go my visions going blurry)

oh my gosh it was so happy den it was so sad my visions going blurry, well great chapter but sad

it was SO CLOSE! so close, why did tohru's co worker have to ruin everything!
but anyway great chapter!

your killin me here :P

I died and went to heven ... or hell ... depends on the next chapter
Inuyasha luver

omg I think I gunna faint
Inu yasha luver

Are u sure your not an author? Wow your awsume!
-Inuyasha luver

I luv it. its great. Its just like the anime. Are you like the authors child or something? Great job keep up the great work!
-Inu yasha luver

O!Yuki is going to make up the things he got wrong .cool
well really i haven't update mine because i have no time to do it and i got a lot of test to do-_-. but i hope yours to update soon ^.^
haha i don't have time but i am still reading faniction . anyway update soon

AH! evilness, cutting off like that! X'o Hurry up and update! AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!...uh...heh...or...take you time, if you wanna...NOW!...erm...forget I said anything...
Rora