Really very beautiful, sexy and emotional. Wonderfully written!

oh my god... that is like THE SADDEST FIC I'VE EVER READ! GAH, I LOVE JONATHAN! this was so great, i'm adding it to my favorites!

I so loved this story! Any chance of you doing more Jonathan fiction anytime soon? I just love how you write him! You have a rare talent that very few possess... keep on writing, please!

Sheri

Ohh...Catie!! You're so amazing! That was...unbelievable! When I said I might feel like a moron reading it I expected it to be so different than this, but this was so amazing! It was so heartfelt and passionate, and I felt like a genius because I remembered Jonathan's name from the cartoon. ;) Really, Catie...You are such an incredible writer!! Write more, write more!! Great job!! ;)
-Sue

lovely story...i managed to skip bits tha were too old for me...
soz about not coming back online on msn 4 u to send me this... my internet went loopy.
lovely fic, well written and sad in a happy way...but still sad...

Holy crap! That has to be one of the best things I've ever read off of this stupid site!
You are SO DAMN GOOD!
I almost cried, i did... i admit it... it was so sad, and beautiful! God you can write!
I used to know everything there was to know about the Mummy, i even have the books of the Mummy and The Mummy Returns... but your story was ten times better than anything anyone could ever write regarding the movie! Its just that good!
I loved it, don't ever stop writing... EVER!

A great way to introduce yourself into Mummy fandom. There's never enough Jonathan and he is hardly ever written well. Well done.

Wonderful story! Then again, I think all your stories are very good. *can't seem to be able to write anything if her life depended on it* Hey, maybe you can lend me some of your talent, waddya say?;) Keep up the great work.:)

Yes! I adore this! Thank you so much for taking the time to write this! A wonderful debut into The Mummy fandom! Her yearning for him to appear is heart-warming and profound at the same time. I felt myself anxiously waiting for him to step through the door just to make her happy. Please DO continue to write more Jonathan fiction! I wait anxiously for the next fic to arrive! Happy New Year, Catie!