Finish this! Please!

WhAt? Please tell me there is more?

Please keep going this is sooo good!

Please please keep writing i love stories like this they are so amazing ive read your story twice cause i loved all the romance and frustration between jareth and sarah! I know you havent updated in a while but im begging you tonot give this up!

OH NO! I just read the last chapter but it wasn't the end of the story and it has been years since it was updated! I loved this story and I want to read the rest of it. **pleeease! pretty pleeease** Yes I am not above whining or begging! ;-) Thanks for sharing it and I can hardly wait for the rest! *hint hint*

Umm. Is it just me, or is there no indentation? Annnnd why are the quotation marks all M.I.A.? *tries to read through the chapter veeerrryyyy slowly so she can actually get it*

Oh, why oh why have you not updated? This one has me hooked in a way that surprised me - I don't normally 'do' Labyrinth fic, and then you go and leave us hanging! I'd beg, but we all know the trouble that gets us into with the Goblin King ; )

I can not wait to see what happens.I do hope that Sarah stops playing games because she clearly wants Jareth.This is a really great story.

a bit confusing in places, but pretty damn good overall. although sarah/jareth's stubbornness/blindness/idiocy is starting to grate, i think it is stretching on a bit long without any real development. that said, i would love to see how this untangles. more?

Please, please, Pleeeeeaaaaaaasssseeee update this story!

Toothpaste for acne? What's with that?

I wandered into your stories via Auld Acquaintance here & was despairing of it never being finished, but then was delighted not only to find the note about its planned re-start in your author's bio, but also that you write for Sookie! :D Your writing is robust & confident, intelligent & deft, capable of handling otherworldly themes with complete pragmatic certainty mixed with a kind of delicacy that makes them believable-perfect for both fandoms.

With the wonderful feel you have for the Jareth/Sarah dynamic, I can just imagine Eric/Sookie, a nice parallel. You've got the crackle, the danger, the sweetness, the uncertainty, the fear-yet-comfort-thing-which-is-really-confusing-to-both-parties, the fondness, that edge of alien loathing/excitation, the raw physicality married with oddly soft, intricate emotions, two strong, capable people with deeply hidden wounds & prickly pride...oh yum. Can't wait!

I was kind of wondering about this last bit...possibly the last two chapters, I think...did your layout go berserk? Because you seem to've lost most of your quotation marks in the dialogue, not to mention paragraph breaks.

In any case, great work! Can't wait to dip into the rest of it.

You really must finish this! You're a wonderful writer and you've somehow picked out two of my favorite characters of all time to write about. P Finish this, and Tasting Sin, and you will be my favorite person EVER. Seriously. D

I find your lack of quotation marks disturbing. :D

Oh how good is this? VERY!

Just perfect, it's got everything and Jareth and Sarah are so in character. I'm loving Jareth's mum, which just goes to show what a great writer you are. I've had my big silly grin on through most of this too.

So happy to read you're going to continue this story, don't leave it too long! thanks.