I like how Xu is portrayed as somewhat sarcastic and possessive. and the way you convey little things with small gestures and details was a great touch. Nice fic. Well written and flowing.

This is incredibly well written, really. I absolutely love your portrayal of Xu. I also like the subtle humor you've got going, very good.
You're showing a very human relationship, which you don't see very often in most fics.
It's basically a passage in their everyday life, no major conflicts, life and death situations or anything of that sort, and it's just charming. I'm marking this, so I can read it a couple hundred times more >.>.
Anyway, just wanted to say, thank you for sharing. I really enjoyed reading it.

This is really quite a beautiful story. I love the Xu/Quistis pairing, and you've definitely done right by it. The details, a major theme of the story, are also the great strength of the writing. That's very appropriete, ne?

Nice pairing . What website?

Whoa...this is soo great!!I love Qu's?Xustis'?You know what I mean.I love every single line wrote in this fic,but my favorite is the'puppies in heat',that's so great!:)

Its..wow *without words* You really know how to write...

Another ravishing Xu/Quistis story. It's the little practical, amazingly descriptive phrases you use that pull me in, I've decided. What a great eye for detail. Beautiful mood; El Tecolote was right in saying the feeling was thick enough to touch. Fabulous stuff, really.

I've been waiting to see this one out for awhile, it feels like, and as with everything else, it has been well worth the wait. I can't wait for Xu to get Quistis to herself and free from some angst, though... but lo, is that a washing machine I hear? ^_~
Of course, I love it. Beautiful, koi.

Lovely..
the feeling was so thick I was actually prodding my computer to see if I could feel it.
I love the whole 'presence' of it.
Keep up the good work!