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You know, I know how rigorously you edit your pieces, so grammatical errors are not what I'm reviewing for.
I'm reviewing because I can't really say anything at all.
And in the end, speechlessness is probably the best thing ever when it comes to reviews.
Other then that...where's the rest it, boggy?

A very well written piece. I almost thought the little girl was indeed Seiji, because of how his parents dressed him like a girl. Now I wonder if in fact Seiji is yet to be born. I'll find out I assume. ^^

this is lovely. This piece is well written with a use of language that really supports the overwhelming feeling. I love it. A lot. You get favorited and my kudos.
I wish I could write like this, it has this old history like feel but none of the boredum and instead a new fresh sort of zestyness or something. Two thumbs up plus one!

BOGGY!!
About time someone else updates in here. *was getting lonely*
What is it with everyone coming up with the soul-searching fics around here? However, I love it.
I mean, it's not often someone writes about the father of the Date children, because half of us know next to nothing, and can only guess how he acts. It's rather odd, but your version is very believable *smells chicken* and once again, makes me a touch jealous of you. Then again, there's a reason why I looked up to you.
Can't wait to see what else that mind of yours has in store for the rest of us. And I hope that it meets your meticulous approval. *winks and laughs*
Now if only life would allow you to update your website. Then we'd be cracking.
Ja ne-
The only bish deliverer

Heya. I said I would review, so...
10th to last paragraph: "had stole" should be "had stolen." You are writing in the past tense, so keep that in mind. I mostly note small grammatical errors and comma splices throughout, but those can be easily fixed. Sentence fragments, I take, are supposed to be there to add due emphasis; as a writer myself, I do the same thing.
Overall, very engaging, impish, and yet honestly sincere tale; I find myself excited for the next installment. ^^

Simply splendid, as always! Your exploration is intriguing.
Damn you for getting the good ideas first!
And no, I don't really mean that.
You'd better come up with another vignette soon! I'll go crazy!

boggy! omg lady! long time no see! ultimate schway on the fic! sweet job as always! hopefully we'll get in touch with each other someime...in the meantime ja matte ne