Aw...!! Marlin's death was too sad. ;__; And what Gill said...oh dear. Angel was neat though. I liked how she slugged him. XD Lols

I'm so excited for the rest! I can't waiting for the ending!

THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME!

This is a good one. Keep writing!

Interesting, but just one question: Why does Gill stutter?

Aww man, The Story is just getting good. hope they'll find dory soon. and not DEAD. please update. thanks

Oh, this is great! Keep Writing! Poor Nemo. And poor Dory. I hope she's okay, too.

Something I hope that will NOT happen:
They DO find Dory...DEAD!
Something I DO hope happens: They find her, alive, of course... :P
Update, PWEEASE?!?!?!

Guys, I am REALLY sorry it's so depressing, but I've written part of the ending ahead of time and I PROMISE you it's happy and will leave you feeling good!! PLEASE DON'T RUN AWAY!

Hey, this is awesome! I loved the movie finding nemo and this story's cool. the only part I din't like was when you killed Marlin...darn. anyway, i hope Gill and Nemo find Dory. Update Soon!
~Kayzie

I'm sorry, its too sad to read anymore, WAH!

lol i like it! more more more! please

Yaysers! An update!
Kool new chapter! I like Angel, hope you bring her back soon! Please continue!
x Dory the Jenny-fish x

great story. chapter 5 should be gill and nemo's serch for dory and her reaction to the news of marlins death.

O.o NO! NOT MARLIN! T_T YOU EVIL CRUEL PERSON!! WA!! *ahem* sorry about that...
-_-;; Another brilliant chapter! I loved it! Will Nemo find Dory? Please, continue on with your fabulous fic! ^_~

*cries histerically* Marlin! Marlin, No!
Sorry about that. It's OK. I guess I realised Marlin was gonna be killed. Thanks for that chapter - it was so sweet.
Atleast sometimes in the story, Marlin might talk to Nemo in his thoughts - like in the film.
Please update again soon! ^_^
x Dory the Jenny-fish x