im not sure if maybe i misread, but you introduced billy to will du, didnt you? in an earlier chapter, when he met ron, didnt he say he had been wills partner until he was sent to the camp? sorry about that, im not certain, but i think thats what it said earlier. that aside, amazing story. i feel so bad for ron. mankey will die, right? =p *prays that mankey dies*

hey when are you going to right your sequal High Noon oh yea long time no see how ya been keep the good stories up and going you old bud - TiggerGTX

Awsome story though I do have to admit when I first started reading it I didn't really get into it and was about to stop completely, but I can honestly say that I am glad that I didn't. The chapters were long and seemed pretty random but when you started tying everything in together like the stuff w/ the villans and Ron putting the smack down and getting recognized beautiful. I mean this story had everything from teenage drama, to blood heavy action, to twists and unexpected turns at the end. This story was awsome even though the chapters were long I could not stop reading them you did an awsome job w/ this story and I can't wait till the sequel to see how you start to sum things up great job man and awesome story.

great story, excellent

Your good at writing the emotional scenes. Although I thought you had Kim be a little wimpy in that part with Monkey. Kim seems more like a kind of girl that would lay some smack down on any guy that would try hurting them.

oh god! is kim really dead? great story!

god man Rising Sun was so damn good cant wait to read the sequel

I hope that Mankey gets raped by an electrified sword, which cuts off his dick, and shovels him a new **, because he is no man if he can be that big of a dick about Ron, and Kim is the biggest idiot I can IMAGINE if she bought that line about JOSH MANKEY, IDIOT EXTRORDINAIRE, giving world famous KIM POSSIBLE a bruise on accident. And how dare he try 'that' with her! AFTER BEATING HER UP! AND AFTER BEATING UP RON!

Is she THAT stupid?

He needs someone right now. But when Ron gets on with what he will do.

I almost feel sorry for them.

Man you're really putting him though the grinder.

I feel truly sorry for Ron. I know more than enough about heartache to feel sorry for him.

You really did a great job on this.

Very well done. I like it, too bad I won't be able to read a lot tonight.

Maybe soon.

you know i really liked the beginning of this fanfic. i even followed through the twelve chapters...until i reached the end or should i say FINISHED? honestly, i expected a better ending not a blood bath. but i still commend you on your great writing. hope the High Noon is better

simply superb..wonderfully written
the ending of this chapter is done especially well!
"He got back on his bike, and drove off back to camp as she slowly began her walk back home as two shooting stars darted across the sky that night."

i just finished your story-and i have to tell you- its brilliant!