Awesome story!

My goodness... & I thought I couldn't luv ur writing more...

U have such an amazing talent... I adore the fact that when I was reading I felt like my eyes were seeing thru the looking glass of Subaru & Kamui's relationship. This story is tops... so much depth :o)

I like how you pointed out in the AN that maybe Subaru is Kamui's guardian angel. I never thought of that and I like the idea, being against yaoi and all...hey, we all have our opinions right?

VERY nicely written. Although... I found an itty mistake...
Somehow, in the back of his mind, a little of his tension was eased. Was this all part of the reason he had chosen to become a Dragon of Earth?
Shouldn't it be Dragon of Heaven?
But, anyway, it was really good. I agree, X seems to have defocused itself; Seishirou, in Tokyo Babylon, had a lot of wisdom... yet he still didn't have feelings... anyway, yeah. ^^

Yeah...I'm too lazy to login. I love this! This is so cool!! Write more!! ^_^ GO SUBARU SAN! heehee.
I'm glad you didn't make it into a one shot fic. Update soon!!

Good story! I love it! I'm agree with your opinion about Subaru's influence to build Kamui's character. Even though Subaru never talked much, what he said always leaved a deep mark inside Kamui's.

Wow, great job! I am really impressed with this... Please write more SK stories in the future! Again, great job! ^_^
Nyaao!!
yamikizu

This was very good. Your fics are always quite deep and I don't think I've seen a typo from you yet. ^_~
I'm also very glad that you didn't rush an ending to Rikoteki na yume. I'd prefer to wait for a well-thought out ending, and I wouldn't expect any less from you.
Happy New Year to you too!
Spazzinglights

I like this story. I'm a big fan of the angst in Tokyo Babylon...I have this huge soft spot for Subaru, and anything to do with Subaru and Kamui so...I enjoyed this.