HMM Interesting going to read the next one and see where it goes.

Interesting start. I can't wait to see how you build this up. It promises to be fantastic.

hmm... this is definatly interesting and well written. you have definatly captured my interest... i will go on to read the next ones. nice!
melissa

I am simply in awe. How is it that I have never read this before? Or even heard of this story, for that matter? I'm shocked that you haven't recieved more reviews, as personally, I think this story contains some of the best plot ideas and has *the* most refreshing writting style that I have ever seen on the internet.

Lucius's plan is so devious and cunning and fasinating. I can't help but feel excited at the prospect of watching it develop, even though I know it will bring horrible effects to the both the Wizarding and Muggle worlds, in a way that Voldemort have never seemed to accomplished. I'm wondering if Lucius will try to gain immortality like Voldemort did, so he can watch has 'plan' take hold through out the magical community and watch the devestating effects it has on the population as a whole. He really is an evil man, and this first part really shows that.

The last-battle-scene was written fantastically well. I've read many, mane versions of it over the years and this was was by far the best. I liked how you intertwined the emotions Harry was felt with what was happening around him. I got a picture in my head of a blazing green fire surrounding him and just thought, wow, Harry is really powerful. You convey that point well.

I'm off to read the next book and preparing myself for whats sure to be an amazing tale...

Stephanie

A fantastic beginning, which I hadn't noticed, stupidly, until half way through A Bit of All Right (since i followed a direct link to it rather than via your profile thing.) Anyway, loved it. Extremely well written.

Lucius is 100 times more dangerous than Voldemort ever was. This man thinks and is neither petty, nuts, or totally vicious. His plan is well thought out and without Severus' power, cunning, and innate pesimism(spelling?) and Harry's power,love and honor he could very well take over before they knew what hit them. Worst of all the man is patient. What glorious description you use, such as compairing the bodies on the battlefield to pick up sticks. Thanks for sharing.

Just realized I hadn't reviewed this. God Lucius is so evil. I'm glad you wrote this, truly helps clear things up a bit.
Cheers~

I like this it was written really nicely anD I could really feel the characters in it.

this is vaary well riten filled with vived descriptions! Will defenitly be reading the next one!

wow, this sounds lie a huge task your taking on...but the beginning sounds fantastic, and you sound like you have it all planned out. I'd love to see a war through several generations, i have a good feeling about this fic. Your descriptions are great by the way; perfect grammer, vivid imagery, sensual and rich but not pretentious. Cannot wait to read the next installment.
- linden

As always, your writing is superb. Although I think Lucius is deluded to plan a war that will take generations to get truly underway. Silly man. Absolute power corrupts absolutely. :)
I am looking forward to the next two chapters of this section, and can hardly wait for the other books in this series.