   Quills of Time 2006-08-17 . chapter 13this is an amazing story, I really like it!! Tough there are a few things I wanted to point out.
I really like your ideas, they're really good, but maybe you should slow down with them a bit. I was thinking... it's not that you don't have enough descriptions or anything, just I get the feeling that sometimes one thing kind of jumps into another, and there's no proper link between them.
Don't get me wrong, I really enjoy reading this. I was just thinking that if you could make it more 'fluent', so to speak, it would be even better.
Apart from that, well done! Update soon, 'cuz I want to see what happens!! =P |
 D. Ho 2006-07-09 . chapter 1 Isn't a filly a female horse? |
| InvisibleAndDumb 2006-05-12 . chapter 8 I hate this fanfic. It really is terrible. Sorry to say it, but it is. Plus, more than half of it is WRONG. |
 Horse-James-Book-Lily-Worm 2006-05-04 . chapter 13good chapters. i have been waiting for some new ones |
| Horse-James-Book-Lily-Worm 2006-03-15 . chapter 10 Well, this chapter was boring *laughs*, but the rest of the story was really good. I love it. But, isn't magick spelled Magic? Anyway, I love it. Keep writing! |
| Seraphim LeFay 2006-01-03 . chapter 8 i likey... |
| Julie Chaney 2005-12-30 . chapter 10 Keep writing this is a great story |
| Tristic 2004-12-20 . chapter 9 Cool! Awesome! Is there more?
PLEASE!
Tristic |
| Tristic 2004-12-20 . chapter 8 wait... do, who is... never mind. GREAT!
Tristic |
| Tristic 2004-12-20 . chapter 7 Good! |
| Tristic 2004-12-20 . chapter 5 Oh! Plot Twist!
Friendly cliff, eh? lol |
| Tristic 2004-12-20 . chapter 3 Awesome!
must...continue... readng! lol
Tristic |
| Tristic 2004-12-20 . chapter 2 Wow! Awesome! Keep up the good work! |
| Cirrus 2004-12-11 . chapter 9 oh i hope you'll update soon! |
| Smiley 2004-05-15 . chapter 4 I didn't read this chapter yet but everything is very cool.I LOVE THIS STORY! |
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