   Sun Knight 2008-10-01 . chapter 6great story so far please update soon |
| teefana 2008-02-06 . chapter 6 wonderful. |
| Eerie Iri 2007-09-01 . chapter 6 Great story! |
 Teri 2006-12-25 . chapter 1Just rereading an old favorite. Very nice work. |
| HitokiriKurisuta 2005-05-01 . chapter 6 that was great! i hope u make another fanfic sometime! |
| stormcloud_03 2004-06-22 . chapter 6 Great story! I just hope that they see the chemestry I the cartoon too! |
| Knight's Shadow 2004-06-17 . chapter 6 Very well done and with a good dialog to boot! |
| Lord Kain 2004-05-17 . chapter 1 oh I love this fic. |
| Toren 2004-01-20 . chapter 6 I liked the story, but I felt it came too far too fast in the last chapter. It appeared to be more forced than the earlier chapters. Never-the-less an excellent idea and a good read on the whole. |
| chris-warren876 2004-01-15 . chapter 6 man...I was hoping it would be adam/gwendolin(sp). Dammit nothing ever works out the way I want it to...(Sigh) oh well, besides teh fact it was really short it was good, great idea. |
| Teri 2004-01-15 . chapter 6 Very nice :D |
| Kiyana Va Sala 2004-01-15 . chapter 6 Nice story. It's good that Whats-Her-Name's father didn't throw a fit like his daughter was about to :)
Any hope of a sequel where more people find out?
(ALL MUST KNOW THE TRUTH!) |
| T. 2004-01-14 . chapter 6 Wow, so sweet. Loved it. |
| Silver Warrior 2004-01-13 . chapter 6 How nice. Adam and Teela belong together. |
| DestroyerDRT 2004-01-13 . chapter 6 WOW!
Great story now I just wish the other stories with this core idea (i.e Adam & Teela getting married) whould finish |
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