Whats next, whats next?

It's Dudley not Duddly. And also Tarmac not Asphalt.

Good story. Very interesting. Update again soon please!

well done, quite the captivating story. Keep up the good work and update soon.

I really like your story so far and I hope that maybe one day you will be able to find what is needed to continue! Thank You

Interesting!

I have added this story to my C2 called Different School.

oh this should be interesting!! it's a pity you havent updated in a while.

Not bad. I would like it to continue.

Hmm. Wonder what'll happen to Harry--er Bennett. There's one 'd' in 'Dudley' by the way. Interesting story, cool concept. Update soon!

very interesting.. but i think it needs proofreading, especially d spellings

Great story! Keep the chappies coming!

excellent

what is "his majority"? - bit confused

do you mean like when he is 'of age' or a legal adult?

update soon.