*tackle hugs you* THIS WAS SO CUTE! I loved how you had Vash's character IC! Awesome!

I love this story. Nuff said.

I can't believe I haven't commented on this yet!
Just re-read you're story for the second time, I love it! It's so fluffy, sentimental, witty, deep and sweet that you just can't help but get giddy and feelin fuzzy when you finish it.

"Even more than jelly donuts!"

More laughter. "Now you're just being silly!"

"Scouts honor!"

- Makes me smile everytime, garaunteed. ^_^
Thank-you for such a wonderful read.

*hiss* FINISH IT~!

No kissy? ;.; No intense flame passion of love?! T_T

I still loved it though. >>;

It occurs to me belatedly that maybe you aren't who I think you are...if this is the case, I apologize for probably confusing the hell out of you. Either way, I enjoyed your fic. The scars were a nice image for the story to center around, and you set the mood well. Keep up the good work! ^_^

Hey Athos--
Aww...that was so cute! (X_X I said the word...Lefan's gonna beat me up >_

I'm not a big romantic or anything, but I must say that this is a job well done. Everyone was exactly in character and that's hard to do sometimes. I hope you write more!
Keep it up!

Well that was just adorable. Very well written. Don't worry about your stories being too long, the more merrier. More detail, more action. "Works for me."
Anywho, good job. I like how you used the scar to connect Meryl with Vash. That was good.
Keep up the great work. I hope to read more of your work.

Very nicely done. I thought it was perfectly in character and believably sweet. I can feel that you put a lot of good effort into this and the result really shows that. Well-written and entertaining. The only suggestions I have concern some of your dialogue. For instance:
"I kinda. well I. you mean a lot to me and I."
Instead of the periods use a dash or maybe elipses like...
"I kinda... Well I- You mean a lot to me and I-"
or something to that effect. ^__^
Wonderful piece you have here once again. I enjoyed reading it very much! Keep at it!
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Writing rocks! So write on!
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Jess 0:o)

O...Awesome story. I really, really liked it, esp the part where Vash finds out about her scars..Just a very sweet and tender moment. Ciao!

Yay! No kissing involved!! Cool!
I can picture this happen (even if it's fluffy) But this is very good. It's believable, their reaction. I'm curious about Knives too.
Good piece!

It was really cute! Too bad it had to stop here... You keep saying you write too much, I say if writing is your passion, then you should write more! That's all there is to it!

I'm such a sucker for VashxMeryl fluff, and that was definitely one of the better I've read! ^_^ Although, I did have one problem... I just CAN'T imagine Knives eating strawberry yogurt...LOL (Hey, I didn't say it was a big one!) Well, keep at your writing, it's beautiful! ^_^
~love, peace, & vanilla pudding~
Captain Murphy's Mistress

aw wow this has to be one of the most sweetest fan fics between vash and meryl i have ever read...i love this so much and your writing style is amazing.

oh...!! I absolutely love it! So way too cute! Great job, keep up the good work! :)