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| Kevin Veighey 2004-04-21 ch 2, anon. | abuseVery good, except I would have picked Piers to be Crono. Keep up the good work! |
| Houzuki Akane 2004-02-17 ch 2, | abuseAh, once again Kraden bores someone/something to death. - Kraden's really egocentric in this, hm? - 'Garet: [offstage, confused] I've never snapped a whipper in my life...' ::laughs:: The jokes on Garet's density! - All right, update soon! |
| Ivan of Vault 2004-02-15 ch 2, anon. | abuseDude! He BORED Gato to death!? (Zephyr) That seems to be the kind of thing he would do. True. He did it to me halfway through Golden Sun Two. (Kraden) That is and outrage!! Jenna? (Jenna) I still need to vent my anger, Kraden. And here, I'm not Marle. *Casts every Mars attack known to man. And women.* (Kraden) *Is charred* Oh! I like my steack Rare! (Zephyr) You're an idiot. Yeah well...AT LEAST I HAVE A SHEBA NOW! BWAHAHAHA! (Zephyr) What's that got to do with anything? Dunno. But I'm happy! |
| Wild Knightblazer 2004-02-14 ch 2, | abuseBWA HA HA HA! Hilarious, simply hilarious! Heh, I loved some of these lines. "I've never snapped a whipper in my life..." "It's just you, a cliff wouldn't work." and the like. Heh heh heh. I'm giggling like a moron now. Oh, and..."After all, anyone who's played CT knows about a certain... scene... with a certain... Lavos... BWAHAHA!" BWAHAHA, indeed. *insert devilishly evil grin here* Though, I think I noticed a plothole somewhere...and a broken promise, KRADEN'S STILL TALKING, gr...but other than that, just a second...*looks over the chapter* Hmm, interesting, can't seem to find it anymore. *looks suspiciously at Omniflyer* Well, I guess that's all, update soon, and all that jazz. Bleh. |
| Aruken 2004-02-14 ch 2, | abuseyes! torture the main charecters! |
| Tetra Seleno 2004-02-14 ch 2, | abuseRun, Omniflyer! RUN! They say muses can be won over with a thing called "sugar", it's something that you might want to try, my friend! - Anyways, this was great. Good for a snicker and quite possibly a giggle every now and then. My favorite parts were Jenna's reaction(s) to her new character, and Kraden trying to get some lovin'. Which, of course, will never happen. - So, next chapter is where the plot begins, no? Can't wait! |
| Hermione-Granger-131 2004-02-13 ch 2, | abuseWhoa. That was mean...poor Jenna, getting stuck with Kraden (where is Garet? She NEEDS Garet!) All in all, very well done. But I am very, VERY glad you did not put Kraden's ful speech...Mighta done some of the rest of us to death...or at least put me to sleep... |
| Houzuki Akane 2004-01-23 ch 1, | abuseA little late, I know, but I decided to review your parody too as I ~was~ in the mood for one... Oh well! - Great and hilarious beginning! ^_^ Oh yeah, and I did I teeny bit of Internet research on the characters. - Kraden as Crono? I don't think he should be the main character, but well... - Kraden/Jenna?!?! Um... At least there isn't any Valeshipping! ^_^ - "...amazing talent...alchemical skill...ravishing good looks..." Don't kid yourself, Kraden. - Right then, please update soon! ^_^ |
| QueenDragonGoddess 2004-01-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseHmm... I will have to do some reserch/ I havn't ever heard of Crono Triger before. Okay, the bigining was funny so I'll give it a shot. See ya. |
| LadyLucca(too lazy to log i... 2004-01-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou know, I could have sworn that I saw this idea started in August by Sapphire Falcon, but I could be wrong, her story was called Sun Trigger. |
| Rednal29 2004-01-03 ch 1, | abuseKraden as Crono? I could be wrong, but he looks more like he's 14 or something, not 140. Oh well. ANYWAYS, this does look like it'll turn out interesting. Kraden is evil... |
| DarkHunter65 and Fluffy 2004-01-02 ch 1, | abuseWHTA"S WRONG WITH VALESHIPPING?! honestly you had to resst it to the point you would to do uggh hmm I know youareaf*ingmoronshipping (Kraden/Jenna's name) anyway before you label this as a flame let me tell you this will probably turn out to be a very funny fic AS LONG AS YOU DON"T TROW IN MUDSHIPPING FOR SOME REASON! oh well whatever just agh oh GOd I just pictured Kraden and Jenna together OH GOD! IT BURNS! AGH! (DarkHunter65 eyes burn him to death) Fluffy: anyway yes apart from the newly created youareaf*ingmoronshipping this should turn out nicely. |
| Wild Knightblazer 2004-01-02 ch 1, | abuseThat goddamn parody bug... ...has provided someone with inspiration for a story that is shaping up to be absolutely hilarious! I mean, Kraden as Crono? KRADEN AS CRONO?! An old senile man playing a seventeen year old expert swordsboy?! What, my friend, were you on when you thought of that? ...can I have some of it? ^_^ I guess that's all I have to say, so don't disappoint us! And update soon! *runs off to play Fire Emblem, take a shower, and write the rest of his Christmas thank-you notes. All at once? Maybe.* |
| Depressing Angel (CS) 2004-01-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhat is Chrono Trigger?? Jenna and Kraden? Have you gone totally insane?...(no need to answer) Umm...I don't know if that's such a good idea... But this sounds interesting... |
| Tetra Seleno 2004-01-02 ch 1, | abuseDUDE! I've been waiting FOREVER for someone to do a parody of CT! *guzzles down some Pepsi* Kindle: Uh-oh. Flint: Its New Year's Eve all over again! *bouncing all over the walls, the ceiling, the floor, and the windows* Kindle: Well, $#&%. Flint: Looks like we'll be taking over from here. Sounds like some great shitzoff, Omniflyer. We can't wait for more! ^^ Kindle: ...shitzoff? Flint: Its made-up Germanese! Kindle: ...right. We await your next update, Omniflyer. Peace out. |