...Awesome!!
beautifully written, wonderful...
I just love this!!

Amazing! Good grammar, well written. And your style of writing is nice and unique! And not boring like Stevenson's.

Everto Tonsor 5:42 AM

Wow- just.. wow!

What a great series. I'm a huge Jekyll fan and this has got to be one of the best piece I've come across here and really gives so much insight into what created the good doctor and drove hin to do the things he did. You really created some awesome imagery as well that added depth to the story. Great!

Ah, I see I've been tricked! This is a complete story afterall. I'm happy about that. :) Enjoyed your writing immensely. You've pictured him so well and deeply I doubt any other fic (no matter about whom) will be as entertaining as this. Great work.

I like the image of Henry playing the cello. *grins* And I also noticed taht you made Hyde a Debussy fan. Someone's been doing their research for this fic. The LXG novelization, anyone? ;)

You're bringing everything together.
I should also add that it's wonderful that you didn't skimp on the events prior to Hyde. They want tact and development, which you very skillfully gave.

You're sticking very well with the book, yet expounding. When Henry speaks of his indiscretions in the novel, he doesn't elaborate. Again, you're being blatantly truthful.
I like it.

Great opening chapter!
You have a good feel for the character, and your honesty with his thoughts makes it more realistic.

Hello

I trouved your fiction beautiful. But, it's just in english. Can it's traduct in french? You can corret me if I make some errors; i know my english is horrible.
Please, respond me.
Tank you
Natycat

Awesome story!

I just finished the story. Absolutely wonderful. I love this really deep delving-into Jekyll's character that you've done. Bravo!

THis is a GREAT story. I love it so very much! Now I'm off to investigate your other works. ^_^ Keep up the good work!

I saw the link to this story on lxg_fiction on LJ, and I am so glad that I decided to take a chance and read it. Seeing as most fics on is absolute crap, yours really stands out in its awesomeness. ^o^ Not only is it extremely well-written and has an enjoyable flow to the words, but you've got such great imagry and descriptions here. You have captured Jekyll to a T and... ah... Aww! He's so... soo... cute. XD

Those silly fictious ladies; I'd be all over him if I could. XD;; And I probably wouldn't made the carnal thoughts, either.

I've just finished reading the first chapter and I look forward to reading the rest of the story -- so I just wanted to say now: great job!

That was truly a realism released! A fact of error so gravely incarnated in Hyde that Jekyll seeks solitude and redemeption yet the beast prohibits. Your writing in usual was the amazement! The strong will of Jekyll to slowly dissipate his evil whilst Hyde's to completely rupture all that exists is a fascinating analysis done thoroughly! YOU ARE AN INCREDIBLE AUTHOR!

This is an incredible piece that has promoted all the penchant in me! Jekyll's loathsome sight upon himself, the treachery of his needs of instinct making him cut off from the noble vision he so kept was absolutely a glory in portrait! You have done a wellness in which all appreciations are released! YOU ARE A INTELLECTUAL AUTHOR!