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| justin huston 2006-10-16 ch 1, anon. | abusegreat story |
| Fallen Ashes 2006-05-03 ch 1, | abuseThis is SWEET! its really good you noe. seriously. hell i love it when its HOT! are you gonna continue? yes no yes no dokay rite? |
| HarmonyLovely 2006-04-11 ch 1, | abuseSo even though, SWAT came out almost three years ago...I just saw it for the first time and automatically fell in love with the movie. I love Chris and Jim as a couple! This was a fantastic short story. You stayed true to the personalities of the characters. ~Rebecca |
| funkycool 2005-11-13 ch 1, | abuseThis is brilliantly written and believeable, there were so many things I loved from this such as the way you kept using she's SWAT. SWAT changed all the rules. One of my favourite stories! Great job! |
| Samix 2005-08-09 ch 1, | abuseIts brilliant! Is this a One-shot? Acctually i dont care, even if it is, YOU GOTTA UPDATE! I love it! Please do another chapter, its fantastic! ^_^ Lady Em-Chan |
| Christieanne-Anna 2005-06-30 ch 1, | abuseReally well writen. I loved this fic. |
| cloris 2005-03-17 ch 1, anon. | abusebest jim/chris story ever! |
| Yvonnia 2005-03-07 ch 1, | abuseThis was good. It was well written and full of sugar-coated sweetness. |
| texasgrrl 2005-01-10 ch 1, | abusedang i loved this story so much it is really good |
| Blue Wolf2 2005-01-06 ch 1, | abuseVery good story. Very well put together and quite believeable. I liked how you used the whole "SWAT'S a family/ dog and kid" thing. I smiled when Jim knew the baby sitters number. Hope you don't mind, but I used the phrase "Don't take this from me." In my first SWAT fic. I gave you credit. Anyway, nicely done. |
| Madame Hardy 2004-12-30 ch 1, | abusecute! |
| swat fan 2004-12-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseAW! HOW CUTE! |
| Malenkaya 2004-08-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery well-written fanfic! Very in depth and sweet. |
| soymaid 2004-07-21 ch 1, | abuseYou write what everyone wished would happen in the movie. Excellent characters, excellent emotions, excellent, excellent. |
| Camilla-- too damned lazy t... 2004-06-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseloved this. first realistic SWAT fic i've read. |