I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

it's actually a really good one-shot beth!

ohh that's so romantic

this was a really good fic. loved it!

Another splendid story.
It's cute.
Severus and Serena together.
Loved reading it.
Good luck with other stories you created.
And best of luck with you at college.

Unexpected Love...PLEASE CONTINE IT!

E! That was cute! -^_^- I wuv Snape/Serena fics! ^_^

It's cute. Unusual, but cute. Figures Setsuna would have to make her choose though.
keep writing!
Ja ne!

I really enjoyed this fic as well as your other one shots its just this is my first chance to review. Please coninue with your great work and have another update on another one shot or one of your fics soon. I'd love to know what happens! ~erika~

Great story.
silver

LIZZIE ! {gives you a big hug} Thank you so very much for this story I loved it. Even though it was short {j/k}. I know how hard it was for you but you did an terffic job at it. I've been going over your other stories and I'm not sure which one you should finish first they are all so good, but if I were to pick which one you should finish...Well I really don't need to say it you all ready know ^_^...Ok I'll say it FAND..it has to be your all TIME BEST STORY. They are al wonderful though. Anyways will email you soon, but just had to tell you that this was an wonderful gift and story my friend. Love ya and talk to you soon.

Aw that's cute!
I like it.

I SO want an update soon! and it better be good!!

yay! i think for your first try at this couple it was still good as the rest of your fics i've read. ^_^ but keep up the good work! and i know how finals are a pain in the butt. but good luck on them!

That was good! Not bad for a first time Sev/Usa! I too had some trouble to write my Usa/Sev one-shot but I pulled throught! The reviewers even want me to continue the fic badly! What to do?...
Anyway! You can always look out under my name (Eternal Cosmos) and check out my stories. I've finished 2 longer ones:
-Fate has brought us together
-Father mine
And I have 3 one-shots (The 4th one I'm finishing to write):
-Usagi/Remus; MOON ATTRACTION
-Usagi/Severus; THE CURSE OF THE DADA TEACHER
-Usagi/Harry; AND THEN THERE WAS YOU
The Usa/Sirius will be; LIFE IS BUT A DREAM and it will come out soon.
I hope you'll take a look and comment! I'd love it if you could tell me what you think about them!
Until next time!
Eternal Cosmos ^_~
ps: I do hope you'll finish some of your other Harry/Usa stories soon! Continue your great work Elizabeth-chan! ^__^