That was touching, splendid, really emotional, a beautiful story... this was very well written; You're a most talented writer and I really hope you continue your excellent work.

wow that is SO sweet!

I really liked it, but the POV seems to be a bit mesed up... @_@

WONDERFUL

i like it alot and sry but cant give u any suggestions

that was the most Bueatiful fanfiction I'v seen so far. I loved how you put actual lines from the show. and the part were Sano was tring to stop Megumi from going back to Aizu is like my fav lines

it's so sweet... wow...continue writing. You could make a carreer out of it.

Your story was great!^_^
I really liked it!
E-mail me.K!^_^

Aurora Maxwell*

Iloved the sweetness of their awkwardness with each other and I'm happy they finally said what needed to be said to each other

::gasps:: I loved it! It was great! Yay for Sano and Megumi!
::goes back to normal self:: When Megumi says 'Maybe I just know you that good.', 'good' is supposed to be 'well'. ::is a grammar perfectionist:: Sorry. Those kinds of things drive me crazy. I was reading one fic one time and the grammar was so horrid it drove me into a fit of stomping.
Thank you for reading my fanfiction!
-The Silly Koneko (I've been too lazy to sign in so all of my reviews to your fanfics are unsigned)

thanks for your review on my story and yours are great too! keep writing ... i will try to read more soon k? keep it up. i love it

Very cute. My one suggestion is this: the consistant switching from person to person is a bit confusing. If you want to do it every other paragraph, write in third person. Or, if you want to write in first person, write a few paragraphs in either Megumi or Sano's personality rather than just one and use '* * *' or something similar to show that the personality has changed.
It was a very cute story. Don't take that the wrong way, I was only giving you a bit of advice. But you did handle the situation well. Again I say it was very cute. ^_^

aw, that's cute. i luv ur fics ^_^

cool story. when are you going to update?

Yay! Great ficcy! I'm looking forward to reading more of your S/M fics! :D