cool story i cant wait till you update and ranma gets more involved

Great story. I almost don't know who to root for, but for now I'll root for Ranma/the dark kingdom. :P Looking forward to future chapters.

This is a very refreshing idea for a sailor moon crossover. There is much grey space instead of black and white only. I wonder what will happen when the Senshi and the negaverse find out that neither side is quite what they thought they were.

It's also very interesting to have Ranma as a "villain." It looks like the Senshi are getting closer to finding him out, too. What will happen then? Some sort of compromise, eventually? I'm assuming Beryl will still be taken down. What(who) will take her place?

I wait with baited breath. This goes on my list of stories to watch.

Nice to see this fic isn't dead. Not too much happened this time around (from Ranma's perspective), but write as you will. Thanks for the update.

Glad to read more of this story. This chapter was up to the usual quality.
My only criticism is that it feels a bit as if Ranma and friends are simply uninvolved observers while the SM plot unfolds. It just seems that their actions have no consequences on the SM plot at all so far.

Another fine chapter jimra. If you still want my prereading servces they are available.

Anyways on to the fic. The scene with Kodachi being recruited/enslaved by Zoicite was interesting and fills my head with thoughts of unwholesome experiments to bring her up to a useable state. Look'n forward to that.

The way you worked Ranma into the portal was well done but I would like to have found out how she avoided detection by the Senshi and her thoughts on the fight. However I suspect that will come out later. Of the fight itself another fine job. These depictions of magical girl warfare are much better than those bound in the cannonic perscriptions.

I almost forgot about Ryoga, I wonder how he will react to Ranma's new combat capacities and the realities of the current situation? Similarly, as Jedite's final battle draws near, I find myself wondering when Ranma will be fielded. The Senshi, or at least Luna, are already casting suspicous glances at his girl-side but it is entirely possible that, in the wake of the Jedite debacale, that Queen Beryl will order him called up as a field asset immediatly. Wets my appitite for more.

Thanks for the fic.

-_-Me-_-

Once again awesome chapter and this is easily my favorite Ranma/SM cross but damn man when are the Senshi going to lose? Please dont take this is as criticism I just want to see them get well and truly curb-stomped, no success at all. Your writing puts a whole new side on the youma perspective and it really makes me empathize with them. I mean damn I just hate seeing them lose again and again, couldn't the senshi get driven off and not save anyone at all once as in a total and complete loss?

From a critical point of view the oddest part seems to be Sailor Moon herself. Despite seeing multiple acts of self sacrifice and such, so far it is not occuring to her that in this universe youma are not souless creatures... I suppose part of that may be just the following of canon, but, realistically, I'd expected a bigger divergence by now..

Of course there is also the generals that in reality are Endymions guardians, yet the way they are portrayed here it is almost as if they have always been dark kingdom generals..

Still, all in all, it is an interesting read.

please continue, i find your version of teh negaverse likeable and i rather like sailorscout bashing

This chapter has been updated incorrectly. You have Chapter One, Episode One here instead of Chapter Two, Episode One. I had to go outside this site to read the actual chapter.

:D

yay violence :3

lol. Nice ficcy. ^^

Love the update, and great writing.

Excellent new chapter. Nice idea to have Kodachi as a new Negawarrior.

A wonderful work once again, and welcome back, do continue.

good chapter.kodachi as zois apprentice?interesting but i hope you have ranma blast them both into dust.

So Mars is here now also, and unless things happen on the side of Moon, I'd say the negawarriors are going to be in trouble unless they can stop them harder than usual.