it is very good. u need to write more pleez.

You had me crying! I never cry when I read these, but you had me crying! It was a beautiful story.

Wow! Nice Fic! I loved the wedding scene! It was beautiful and I felt like I was actually there! Thanks oodles!

Peace, Love, and Llamas,
Kiera Lee

Beautiful fluff
Thorn

I like this chapter. It is good chapter.

I like this chapter. It is good chapter.

I like this chapter. It is good chapter.

There is such a thing as too much fluff

Sex-scean please.
-Mis Elizabeth

Your story is wonderful so far, no matter how long it takes, please updat when you can.

While this chapter was all sap and had me gagging in places, I am very impressed that you did so much research for this chapter! Brava! Do update, though, maybe work in these other facets, and their kids as well. Heh.

*wipes away a tear* Man..I hope my wedding turns out like that..that was gorgeous.

Oh, Goddess! This is absolutely beautiful and the most perfect Hermione/Severus romance I've ever read! I love it as much as Sev & Mione love each other. Thank you.
PS Wish you had had Hermione tell Percy to go to Hell and screw Voldemort (they'd make a perfect couple too).
Once again, thank you for writing this.

Completely out of character for everyone. Amazingly, you've managed to turn each and every single character into a Sue.

Please get a beta - someone who knows the difference between "of" and "off" as well as the difference between "to" and "two".
I really can't get through the first chapter of this - Hermione is too OOC. As is Snape. You have some promise as a writer - but you need to age a little first to make it readable for mature audiences.