Okay, I don't know which of your stories is my favorite.

I love them all.

keep writing,
Italy

I love it!!

I love it! It's so sweet, and well-written. I love the twist on Sleeping Beauty - the beauty that's meant to fall asleep is the only one who doesn't. Love it.
I hate Godfrey! He makes me want to strangle him! GAH!
You are a wonderful writer, and I love your story.
X.

Hi! Awesome and beautiful retelling story of sleeping beauty. It is one of the best retellings I read by far. There are a few grammar and spelling mistakes. The story didn't flow when you switched point of views. You could have said "Long ago before I was born..." and when you did the inside and outside part. You could have written "Meanwhile, while I was going up to the tower, Jason told me what had happened outside." Other than that, it was a beautiful story. I liked your version better than Charles Perault, it was he who wrote the story not the Grimms, because after Sleeping Beauty wakes up her mother-in-law is an ogress and eats her children. It is a dark fairytale. Encore!

A lovely end, the child expectancy is perfect. However you should put in somerthing where Rose tells her mother she loves her to her face. That's all. Adios, kiddo! Your story's great!

Yay!! The fight scene should have been longer though, but I guess I don't hate the mother after all. (sigh) well onto the next chapter.

Alright I really do like this story now. Please end it nicely. I don't want to be sad by the final curtain!

I swear I hate her mother! ERRG! She drives me to do unspeakable evil! Somebody PLEASE KILL HER! AG! Your spelling needs work, but it hardly matters because SHE IS SO EVIL! I am vastly amused by this story.

OH I Hate Rose's mother! The chapter name sounds a bit funky, but have you got me mad at her mother!

Ah, the story continues to amuse me. However hazel is more of a green-brown, and occasionally a light brown. Emerald green is just green or emerald green. And the last line of this chapter seems a little bit corny. But other than that, it's pretty good!

The castle sounds a bit too stereo-typical, but the candles are cool and everything about how she meets the witch-fairy is awesome! A few noticeable spelling errors, nnothing too severe. good job, I wanna read more! This capter has got me hooked!

Huh. that was a pretty cool story. I liked how the girl isnt a helpless princess. i noticed that you put her in parts that are generally not "played" by women, like propsing, so that was cool. It almost seemed to end a little abruptly, right there at the end, but that's ok. it did seem a little weird how much work the royal family did if they were so asborbed in posistion and rank, like the queen dressing her daughter. Overall though, pretty cool, and definitely very original. good job! :)

Wow. This is...this is great. This is just so great. I read through all fifteen chapters before even daring to review. If this was a book I would not have been able to put it down. This is excellent. You have a lot of talent. Thanks so much for sharing this with us less talented people. Great job!

--Anne

i enjoyed reading your story!

just a suggestion tho...the last two chapters were sort of rushed through...not the precise detailing and characterization that occurred in the rest of the story. Especially the very last section =/

didn't you say in the last chapter that the engagement was to be declared on her 21st birthday? and now you're going back to 18...

but good story anyways =)