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Taeniaea 2008-08-07 . chapter 24
great story
VampGirl300 2008-07-05 . chapter 24
Wow!! that was BETTER than Left Behind!
jondy09 2007-07-30 . chapter 24
I REALLY wish you had kept going, I mean how do they survive on the outside? How do they contact everyone?
jondy09 2007-07-30 . chapter 23
Max should've strangled him when she had the chance *glares at computer screen*
jondy09 2007-07-30 . chapter 22
What are you talking about, Moving Alongside?? Anyway back to reviewing NO! If that idiot exposes Manticore they will all burn and I like Manticore it is home *pout*
jondy09 2007-07-30 . chapter 21
FINALLY!! But that dream sequence was a bit mean... the best thing ever would be for the 09ers to be caught and reindoced but in all likelyhood all of unit and 8 and special ops will be convinced to leave by them... (I'm a manticore brat through and through)
jondy09 2007-07-30 . chapter 20
I want him to know Max and Tara are from Manticore before he dies... I'd love to see the look on his face
jondy09 2007-07-30 . chapter 19
No grr, I love them and all but no Maxie belongs at Manticore w/ her new family
jond09 2007-07-30 . chapter 17
:( Max seriously needs to get over her fear, there are ways to gt over phobias... I hope she can forgive Alec and that Ben stays safe
jondy09 2007-07-29 . chapter 16
I saw that comment about logan.. and I was thought 'darn'
anyway, YOU ARE AMAZING!! I doubt you're reading these because I've written so many in so short a time and this story was written awhile ago but... please write more manticore fanfic.. I'm sort of fixated on manticore but any DA fanfic would be awesome!! :) The Alec we saw in 'Hello Goodbye' (I think that was it) is really showing through in your story; he really cares for her :) You're ability to have a great, dark, deep story and yet still have humor is great! (kind of like the real DA) Maybe you should've been one of the writers!
jondy09 2007-07-29 . chapter 15
Poor Seth :( mwahahaha Logan is going to die... (I'm not evil really) I just recently became M/A so... I might be going over board.. but please don't let him make them want to leave Manticore
jondy09 2007-07-29 . chapter 14
YES!! Those A$$HOLES FINALLY GOT WHAT THEY DESERVED! Yay spec. ops. and unit 8! I also love how it was all dark but you threw in humor :)
jondy09 2007-07-29 . chapter 13
Has nothing to do with this chapter but I just realized Biggs doesn't get lynched because they are all still safe at home sweet home, manticore
jondy09 2007-07-29 . chapter 12
I'm glad everything turned out ok :)

“Just making conversation Max.” he sighed heavily “Let me guess it’d be some computer dork with toilet brush hair, specs and a let-me-save-the-world complex.”

Max laughed “Nasty!”

Forgot to say this in the ch. it was in but lol
jondy09 2007-07-29 . chapter 10
Oh no, please tell me Rachel is sick that day or he decides he doesn't care or something... I don't want him going to psy-ops and being with the nomalies :(
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