 Antithesis 2005-12-18 . chapter 2Okay... just, wow. I suppose it would be useless for me to ask what the crap is going on, but so far I like what I hear-- er, see. Just keep an eye out for typos. But the imagery you gave (especially Rufius) was very descriptive, sometimes too much, but I'd rather there be more than less. If this isn't going to be updated, please tell me what happens! |
 Shaladin 2004-05-05 . chapter 2Wow. All I have to say is this is one of the best stories I've read lately. The level of detail you put into this is astounding, truly a work of art. I can't wait untill the next chapter. Until then, I'll be watching and waiting. |
 Water Mist 2004-04-07 . chapter 2 Oh...my god...THIS IS SO GOOD!
I loved the parts with Gary and Umbreon! So Gary can understand him now...hm... I wonder if it's just Umbreon or can he understand all pokemon now? I've been looking for a good story with the two of them in it and it looks like I found the right one! ^_^ I'm also loving the cryptic song Ash was singing. It's as if it was a part of him from a time long forgotten. ^_<
Can't wait for more plot development in that area! Excellent job! Please write more soon! |
 Celticwelsh 2004-03-28 . chapter 2Wow. Just wow. You have to update asap! Altho I have a feeling that may be for a time. It's huge! |
 Musogato 2004-03-26 . chapter 2Such an amazingly interesting story! I really hope you continue and post the next chapter soon. Although with such detail and development that you have taken the effort to write, I'm sure these long chapters take a while to write. Well, I'm rooting for you! ^_^ (...and why do I get the feeling that Rufius and Litanias are related? Well, I won't post my theories here)
Anyway! You are a gifted writer and I truly hope you continue working on this fic. 'Cause I will be waiting patiently to read it. ^-^; |
 Charm65 2004-02-09 . chapter 2Hello! Long time no review! ^_^! I'm so happy! I guess it's because I haven't been on the net in ages. Started school you know. -_-; Oh well. Anyways. . . You wrote a new chapter! ^_^! Go you! (OK, the school effects are kicking in) I'm just too happy today. It's not like me. Anyway, back to the point. Your story, that's the reason I'm here! It was a great chapter. Hell, I though the Prologue was great. Ash's dream was a good start to the chappie, getting people curious about what's going on. Smart. But he gets freaky at the end. And the laughing man. He's scary. But what makes me real happy is that Umbreon's OK!! ^_^! One last thing, you like including Mews in stories don't you. ^_^ Hence your name. Well, I shall keep you waiting no longer. I think this is the longest review I've ever written. 0_0! Wow, a record. ^_^! (I'm taking advantage of my free time). I'd better start writing my last chappie for my story. How long has it been? OK, babling on again, I'll leave you in peace. Happy writing!
*Charm65* |
 star's dreams 2004-02-02 . chapter 2SD: In all utter amazement WOW. Your going on my fav. |
 nightdragon0 2004-02-01 . chapter 2Well, looks like it'll be quite a bit with the legendaries! Nice!
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Let's see, I'd guess Ash would go get a PKM like his Charizard back and start searching somewhere.
(I guess Charizard's one of his strongest unless he gets someone else in Advance Generation. I've heard though Charizard comes back in the AG movie with Rayquzza.)
And why do i have the feeling Ash will develop the same ability as Gary later?
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Mewtwo and Latias have also had some closer interactions with Ash during the movies, so that could come into play too. |
 Krazy 4 Pokemon 2004-02-01 . chapter 1 I LOVE THIS FIC!
Hurry up with the next chappie!
*pika pika* |
 star's dreams 2004-01-12 . chapter 1SD: I love your writing I love this sttory and I will love to read the rest. |
 nightdragon0 2004-01-03 . chapter 1Hey, no probs! I enjoy reading something as good as this. Guess I told you what I thought of it already, but great job! |
 Charm65 2004-01-02 . chapter 1Wow! This is such a cool story! How do you write so many good stories at the same time? This is beyond amazing. I can't wait to see what happens next. ^_^ Oh I'm so excited! Well, update soon!
*Charm65* |
 Q5 2004-01-02 . chapter 1Awesome story! Can't wait to read more! |