oh boy... i'm really looking forward to watching these kids get together. update soon!

i liked that one line, "Scout Halliwell didn't cause trouble. If often found her, he thought, but she didn't cause it." funny. and since shani does cause trouble...

I likey this story it's awesome!

Cute! I like the kids, but Shani definitely needs someone to rein her in. I can't imagine Xander being so unable to deal with his daughter.

I'm curious how you came up with the name of Scout for Phoebe and Cole's daughter. That's an interesting name for a girl, having only heard it used for boys before. :)

Now, what ARE the little munchkins going to get up to and how in the world will they meet? I'm betting Scout shimmers into Sunnydale. Am I right? *curious*

This is a good story so far please contiue.

Thinking about it, I think you're right GG! It does make more sense doesn't it? Not least because I find it easier to write the Charmed characters.

glad you updated, but I'm ready to see some action. I actually think I'd rather see Shani get sucked into the Charmedverse than see Scout in the Buffyverse, partially because I think it would be really funny if Piper, for instance, became the person who doesn't put up with Shani's tantrums.

Looking forward to more.

Looking good. I like it.

I actually think this fic is interesting. Your kids aren't as cookie cutter as most kidfic kids are. Anya's "she's only mine when behaving" line was really funny, though I think you could have taken better advantage of it if you'd had her come back earlier with her "behaving now" line, learn that the answer was no, and leave.

So, if Shani has Anya and Xander wrapped around her fingers, who is it who IS capable of saying no to this kid? There's got to be SOMEBODY. For some odd reason, I could see it being Tara. Or maybe Buffy? Giles?

Scout is adorable and would compliment Shani nicely. Like that Aunt Piper is the one who puts her foot down.

Please do so more of this I would like to read mor

Hahaha i love it cole is funny around kids its like they are his weakness

I like this, please continue

really really good please continue really quicly

Cute. Worthy of continuing, I think. You have a few grammatical problems, mostly with tense: "was stood" instead of "was standing" and "she may be" instead of "she may have been" since your story is in past tense. Anyway, I like it.

Very cute please continue