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| kunoichi cherry 2008-05-29 ch 9,  | abuseThis story was so awesome! Love the KasumixHayabusa pairong and the ending was spot on. Hayate being the overprotective brother all of a sudden, lol ^.^ |
| La Mariposa3795 2008-05-06 ch 9, | abuseI absolutely LOVED this story! Great job!! |
| TehDono 2008-02-25 ch 9, | abuseI had to admit, i wasn't expecting am award winning prose or anything, but the story was nice. And it was hillarious. Kept me laughing. I only wished that you didn't end it so quickly... Lolz... I would have liked it to be long and drawn out... maybe a re-write may inspire this? XD |
| Dark12light 2007-10-06 ch 5, | abusehayabusa is a good actor LOL |
| Dark12light 2007-10-06 ch 4, | abusemission impossible dun dun dun... |
| Dark12light 2007-10-06 ch 3, | abuselol brad wong is like 50, and he has a crush on our red-headed kunoichi? i guess its very likely... yay. a ryuxkasumi ficcie! |
| Dark12light 2007-10-06 ch 2, | abusejann lee is so ego-much here 'you're beautiful enough to be my sister' LOL kasumi-bear! that was fantastic! |
| Dark12light 2007-10-06 ch 1, | abuseSLEEPOVER!! lol |
| devilgrl1 2007-09-30 ch 9, | abusethis story is so kawaii! i can't believe how it ended. it is just so awsome. this is the best story i read. |
| cherryblossom279 2007-09-10 ch 9, | abuseaw this was a awesome story |
| Yvonnia 2007-07-07 ch 9, | abuseOh this story was too cute. It made me laugh; I loved it. Job well done. |
| Yohomeboy90 2007-06-30 ch 2, anon. | abuseYOU MADE AYANE HORRIBLE GR. JK But you did make her pretty bad why yes she in very violent but why you can see why she is soo cold because of KASUMI! |
| rOxANNa 2007-02-25 ch 9, anon. | abuseLOVE the ending though i find the part where they go to the tounament and to doatec though... no offence... |
| Chibi Ninjaa xo.cherry 2006-12-23 ch 9, | abuseAww! Hahah, that was such a cute story!! A happy ending for the sibs, including Jann, Tina, and Brad. Aw..poor Leifang. LOL. I lub this story so much!! |
| Chibi Ninjaa xo.cherry 2006-12-23 ch 8, | abuse“Don’t kill him!” Jann Lee yelled. “We still need him to keep us employed!” That was the best I read in this chapter, it was so funny!! |