This story was so awesome! Love the KasumixHayabusa pairong and the ending was spot on. Hayate being the overprotective brother all of a sudden, lol ^.^

I absolutely LOVED this story! Great job!!

I had to admit, i wasn't expecting am award winning prose or anything, but the story was nice. And it was hillarious. Kept me laughing. I only wished that you didn't end it so quickly... Lolz... I would have liked it to be long and drawn out... maybe a re-write may inspire this? XD

hayabusa is a good actor
LOL

mission impossible
dun dun dun...

lol
brad wong is like 50, and he has a crush on our red-headed kunoichi?
i guess its very likely...
yay. a ryuxkasumi ficcie!

jann lee is so ego-much here
'you're beautiful enough to be my sister'
LOL
kasumi-bear!
that was fantastic!

SLEEPOVER!!
lol

this story is so kawaii! i can't believe how it ended. it is just so awsome. this is the best story i read.

aw this was a awesome story

Oh this story was too cute. It made me laugh; I loved it. Job well done.

YOU MADE AYANE HORRIBLE GR. JK But you did make her pretty bad why yes she in very violent but why you can see why she is soo cold because of KASUMI!

LOVE the ending though i find the part where they go to the tounament and to doatec though... no offence...

Aww! Hahah, that was such a cute story!! A happy ending for the sibs, including Jann, Tina, and Brad. Aw..poor Leifang. LOL. I lub this story so much!!

“Don’t kill him!” Jann Lee yelled. “We still need him to keep us employed!”

That was the best I read in this chapter, it was so funny!!