Nice, very nice. Draco is faring quite well with his emotions, and seems like a big brother to Ellen. There hasn't been any mention of Delaney for a while, and Blaise is nothing but a follower and a **.

I wonder how long it'll take for Draco to experience jealousy. Update!

perhaps once upon a mattress or something...lol...i loved your story the fallen...i cant wait for chp 47...i cant wait for draco and hermione's relationship to flourish :) good job

Just started reading this yesterday..and wow, it's absolutely amazing! I hope you'll continue this story.. Ü

I lovelovelove this story. You've tried really hard to define all these emotions; emotions which we never really stop to think about what they mean. Your definitions seem so perfect and simple, it's incredible. Your story is coming along really well, and I love this vulnerable side to Draco. Keep up the brilliant work, and update soon!

this story has an interesting concept, and i can get used to the idea of Draco with wings. Though, i would wish that he would have been a little bit more in character, cuz he does act a bit OOC at times. Isn't Draco suspposed to be the bad boy? i don't mind if he ends up nice by the end, but i would like a bit more character development, not that your character development is bad, i just think he became nice a little to quickly. But overall, a good story. :)

oh, and i know there are people out there that love Harry/Ginny, but i'm not one of them :(. It just gets a bit tiresome when i have to read the parts with harry/ginny moments. but whatever

hee hee. i like the idea a lot. usually i don't go for the draco unhuman storyline...but seriously- a little fallen angel smexiness won't hurt...*swoon*

heh heh

I meant OOC, not OC. My mistake. Oops.

Why's Blaise a girl? I thought he was a boy! What's going on here?
Other fanfics have him as a boy, though often a gender confused one, I must admit. But male none the less.
Blaise even sounds like a boys name. Never have I met a girl named Blaise.
Besides that your story is pretty good, a bit OC and repetitive, but intriguing.

First, for your play you could try doing fairy tales, but mix them up. The setting would be one forest and then just throw in a ton of classic fairy tale characters and have them interact. My school put on a play like that last year. It was called Once Upon One Noddah Time. It's Hawaiian so it's spoken in a local dialect with a clash between characters that speak proper english. You would be able to put together something much simpler without the terrible english. Maybe have Snow White and Cinderella and have them fight over Prince Charming. Something like that.

Secondly, I think I reviewed Macbeth under JBean, but I'm not sure...In any case, assuming I did, I just wanted to follow up and say that I you're an incredible writer. I think I like Macbeth more simply because I'm a fan of Shakespeare and you really did an amazing job of creating parallels and melding quotes from Shakespeare, the dialogue and plot together. The characters were also very well done and Malfoys gradual transformation is believable. However, the fact that you've come up with such a creative idea for Fallen is in and of itself amazing so I can't really say one is better than the other. You've created a completely different creature in Draco Malfoy which is a very difficult thing to do. I've had to write fantasy stories for classes before and it's really rather hard to come up with backstories and keep the whole thing from spiraling into a completely different world. You've done an amazing job. I think Fallen would be the more difficult story to write simply because Malfoy is an entirely different being. I like your slow plot progression since you're very through. I don't think I have any complaints which is strange because whenever I peer review someone ends up with hurt feelings (I mean really is it that hard to spell check?). Well I look forward to your next chapter. Since I wrote my own story I realize how review can bring the author manymany warm fuzzies so I'll be sure to review your next chapter, but I don't think it will be quite as long...

This is absolutely brilliant! I spent about three days reading this between school and homework, and I adore it. The whole concept and how you keep everyone in character. The ups and downs of Draco's "new life" are brilliant, and beautifully exectued and totally believable. You obviously take a great pride and a certain dedication to your writing to research new - and plausible- spells. Amazing.
I've noticed the most recent update is about four years ago. I PRAY that my computer is glitching and that you continue to update Fallen.

You are brilliant.
~ The Rainbow Spork

i absolutely adore your work.keep it up! i'll be looking forward to the upcoming chapters. :)

artermis

I wish you would update this story. I wonder why Lucius and Voldemort be against muggleborns since such prejudice wouldn't be logical.

Rowling must have been reading your story when she came up with the plot of Deathly Hallows.

Hello there! Since I've learned you love reviews oh so much, I've decided to give you one. =) I'm only on chapter fourteen but I'm completely in love with your story and heartbroken that you haven't updated in so long- nor are you planning on it. I love slowly moving Dramiones and yours is exceptional, so I really hope you find it in you to pick up this story again. It is so original and your characterization is spot on! Anyway, I'll be going back to reading now. =)

I think this is better than the actual books. WAY better. And if you never update this... I will resort to random hexes/curses. If that doesnt work, I will beg. If that doesnt work, I will lock myself in my room and mourn for a week because it is practically a crime not to finish this. It is seriously that amazing, and thats saying something coming from me, if you dont believe me find some of my friends and ask them. They know that I dont enjoy anything that much, and I sat down & didnt read anything else until I finished it because I couldnt concentrate on anything else because this is so amazing (also big, I usually read at least 1 or 2 goodsized books a day- no lie), and am considering rereading it. If you dont finish this I will literally go insane.