Such a shame this story was never finished! Again, I'm sorry I didn't review for every chapter (although I'm sure I'll be re-reading this in the future). You wrote everyone so well! I enjoyed the plot very much, and I loved the quotes you used at the top. (Especially the one in this chapter from Good Omens - I was thinking about that book when I was reading this story! I really want to read that book again, but my copy's in Brazil...)

In any case, great job! I'll be reading other stories of yours soon, I expect. Thanks for writing this! The only regret I have is that Hermione and Draco never got together. *sigh*

Well, I'm a few years too late to catch you on this story, which I'm very sad about, because I found an amazing song for Draco's character in this story.

The band is called Dir en grey - it's a Japanese metal band. (But the song I chose is in English, so that's good!) The song is called "Glass Skin." It's a slower song, and not heavy at all (more of a general rock feel) but the lyrics are what makes it. For example, the chorus:

I open out my wings of glass
Up and towards the wind, melted future
So just please don’t go
Please don’t go
Be close to you

And then there are other glimmers from the lyrics that really make me want to cry, like "slowly stains my heart," "sins are scattered everywhere," and "how heavy is blood?" It's a song about loneliness and everything, but I figured it could also show what dear Draco was feeling after the switch - depression, anxiety, loneliness.

I don't know if you read your reviews anymore, but I also wanted to add the reason I haven't reviewed until now is because I simply can't interrupt my reading!! It's so good!! Even Ginny (whom I normally hate) is a character I enjoy now.

By the way, if you'd like me to send you this song, e-mail me or something and we'll arrange it. Or you could probably find it online somewhere. *shrug* In any case, back to reading!!

hey :) hope u update soon! u haven't updated for over 2 years *gasp*

FINE. Let me give you 5 reasons to update FALLEN:

1) u have updated all your stories and finished macbeth too! so u should try to finish this! :D

2) hm. u are a responsible author right? so u should update this :P

3) this story has great potential with a great storyline and plot!(:

4) i'm sure many of your readers would like to read the rest of the chapters!

5) um. LOL. its an awesome story and i can't wait to see draco & hermione fall in love xD

please update if u can! if u really can't, then nevermind! :D

~bel :)

P.S. sorry for the long review! first time reviewer :)

Hey Cyropi

My name is Lili and I have been a Will/Djaq from Robin Hood for a while now. I have just discovered Draco/Hermione fanfiction. Which is silly as it has been there for ages. I have become completely obsessed with it and have read some really great fics and some really cliché ones. I only just found Fallen and after reading 46 chapters of it i feel like i owe you longer than normal review.

I just wanted to tell you how utterly brilliant i think it is. I’m not sure how old you are now, but I think the last A/N I read mentioned your 16th birthday (apologies if I’m wrong). Your writing, even at the beginning of Fallen shows the maturity and style of someone much much older. I was amazed to find out how young you are! Also your knowledge on philosophy and Latin ect really is astounding and adds so much intelligence and depth to your work. I notice on your profile that you are studying creative writing at University now. I hope that is going well for you, you certainly have a talent for it. Needless to say I am looking forward to your next chapter of fallen whenever you can post it of course. I know, having tried my hand at fic myself, how time consuming it can be. Great stories (like Fallen) do take time and I just do not have the time to spend on them. Thus my fics are often unplanned and weak. But congratulations on this brilliant fic and I fully intend to read all your other work.

Sorry for such a long review. But I just wanted to express how much I loved your work.

Lili X

wowz. i love it! its absolutely ahmazing(:

iwant more dramione and an update soon!!


haah

x

I would suggest some ideas but it has been over three years and more than likely, the play has been over and planned. Anyways, I really enjoyed this story. I hope it hasn't been discontinued. MacBeth still is my favorite story written by you, because mainly it's finish and ended with D/Hr as oppose to this which isn't finish at all, I'm sure if you come back and complete it up, it'll grow to be my favorite.

I love the descriptions and etc like that, the only problem I had is because I'm not completely use to Draco being entirely good, borderline gryffindor. I usually love reading the Draco is good but still incredibly sarcastic and rude. But I'm liking the originality of the plot and your Hermione is written perfectly.

I haven't completely read this story in a year now, skipped ahead a few six or seven chapters so I can leave a review today and I'm about to go back and reread the entire fanfiction just to keep it fresh in my mind, so when you do UPDATE, I won't be lost.

I wish you were planning on continuing this. I've really enjoyed it up to this point...but I can certainly understand not being able to continue with a story when life takes over.

OMG! reali reali great story but hey, wheen r u gonna update?!?! it has been like 3 YRS! plsplspls update! there hasn't even been romance yet!! pls update! PLEASE!

You haven't updated this story in 3 years! And you haven't been on FanFiction for about 2! I really love this story, and would love it if you would continue it! It has such a great plot! I really hope you update this soon!

No! I found this wonderful story, and you haven't updated in three years! *cries miserably*

Of course, if there's an actual reason and not just you (meaning The Author With Supreme Power Over This Fic) being vindictive, then it's okay. But if you are being vindictive, then that's just cruel. And unusual.

Cruel and unusual is not cool. Really.

Oh please continue with this story! It's come such a long way and it would be a real shame if you simply stopped writing. Please update soon!

i've read some of your other stories, yea, this one's pace is a LOT slower than the others...but i like it~.<
nice work!

this is the BEST story ever!
i know its been years but i really like to know how this ends
so if you ever get the time please finish this =]

I'm quite sad to have reached the end of your story. It was such a refreshing, original story.

This is truly how a Dramonie ought to progress. (Though I still hold some reservation that you kinda cheated by saying, "Oh? All that before? Totally his evil twin." Yet because that's integral to your story it works very nicely.) You're very consistent in delivering wonderful chapters. Thank you!