Wow. Birth on the beach. That was quick. I'm glad it all worked out. Love the names they gave them. Good story, can't wait to read the next.

Poor Tori, going into labor while captured, it's a good thing they found her. I like how Blake and Taka were fighting and Hunter was there to help his sister-in-law, it was different and still tense filled.

I like how stubborn and how much faith Tori has that they will find her. Love the "Daddy will be here soon" comment.

I like how they're all doing what they can to find her, I wonder what else Marah knows about Taka.

Poor Blake. I like how Sarah and Hunter talk about it.

Wow. I like how you had them all enjoying just hanging around. Marah knows Taka, I wonder how...

Now Tori is taken, I wonder how they're going to get her back and what he wants with her.

Wow. Good thing they told them about the prophecy. I can't believe it. I hope all will be well.

Love the part at the track, it was cute with Shayne and Clarke.

You killed Shane!!?? Oh my gosh, that was so sad. I like how the named the kids after him.

Tori and Blake are going to have twins!

I wonder what the thing is with Tori and Blake.

I LIKE THIS LAST CHAPTER! HUNTER GOT TORI OUT OF THERE AND SHE HAD THE TWINS ONE BOY AND ONE GIRL! I LIKED THEIR NAMES TOO HAILEY MARAH BRADLEY AND OWEN HUNTER BRADLEY! NICE LAST CHAPTER!

~Navy Thunder Girl~

OH NO! TORI IS IN LABOR! BLAKE AND THE OTHERS BETTER GET TORI OUT OF THERE! AND KEEP UP WITH THE STOREIES!

~Navy Thunder Girl~

THIS WAS A AWSOME CHAPTER! I HOPE THAT BLAKE AND THE OTHERS GET TORI OUT IN TIME BEFORE THE TWINS ARE BORN AND BEFORE TAKA GET TORI'S KIDS!

~Navy Thunder Girl~

I WONDER WHY CAM HADN'T TOLD TORI AND BLAKE ABOUT THAT THEIR CHILDREN LIVES WERE ENDANGER? I'M CLUELESS! BUT KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK ON ALL THE TORI/BLAKE FICS!!

~Navy Thunder Girl~

I THOUGHT THIS WAS CHAPTER WAS COOL WHEN TORI FOUND OUT THAT SHE WAS GOING TO HAVE TWINS! I THOUGHT THAT WAS SWEET!

~Navy Thunder Girl

I CAN'T BELIEVE TAKA TOOK TORI! HE WIIL NOT TAKE THE TWINS FROM TORI! I KNOW! BLAKE AND THE OTHERS WILL FIND HER AND GET HER OUT OF THERE BEFORE THE BIRTH OF TWINS!

~NAVY THUNDER GIRL~

Ok, how the hell can there be only 4 Reviews for this fic? Normally your stories get 100+ reviews! This is outragious! Lol, So I decided to post a review out of my profound respect of your writting!

I love it!! Write more like this!

That was awesome! I loved it as much as the oringinal!!
CamFan