its a really good chapter i would write more but i g2g
bye forever and a day

O! GOOD! Hopes you writes more!

yayayaya updations! I love updations! This chappie was coolio. Kloppman is one of my saviours. Racetrack is my other. I want to know what;s going to happen! Hopefully your updates will come soon! *hopes hopes hopes*! I hate it when NONE of the stories on my favorites get updated, and I have to check every hour just in case. AS you can tell, i have absolutly NO life. If I had a life, I definitly wouldn't be reading stories online. LOL. I'm so lame. So is Jack. Jacks a moron. But I wub his character, and I wub Christian Bale. CB's got an out-of-this-world body. have you seen American Psycho? You get to see his butt! And his chest and such. very hot stuff. okay, i have to stop typing now because i have something in my eye and i haven't stopped typing to get it out. okay. bye!
-chelsea-

So now she doesn't have a place to stay? Poor Danni. I'm really interested in how this story will turn out:) Plz don't take 2 months to write the second chap *begging eyes* Write more soon!
CTB
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thats good, but hows it gonna work now?...lol. update soon!

Hey. Great story! Keep writing. Update soon i wanna know wht happens:)
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YAY! An update! I didnt log in because I'm lazy. Ha! you're a poet and you didn't know it! You said {{ Danni looked around for a place she could hide. The only thing that she saw there was a table that had been knocked over on it’s side.}} LOL! Sorry, I had to point that out because I'm a lame-wad. HA! I liked this. I liked it that it was Blinkface and Crotchy (HAHAH) who saved the day and not Spot or Jack or Racetrack. Holy that rhymed too! Anyway. Great update. try hard and get the other chapter coming. I haven't got an idea where this is going, AND I LIKE IT! will she end up with Jack? Will she somehow get to Brooklyn and Spot and her duke it out? I hope so. I'm in the mood for cliches right now. Just don't make Danni a mary=-sue. I'm definitly not saying she is because if she was, she would have gotten away from those ugly old men because she's an 'expert foitah', but she didn't. yay! YAY FOR BLINK FACE! sorry, i'm a little uh, blah right now. update quick!
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OO I just love a good Jacky-boy story. Makes me day and believe me, this day couldn't have been worse.
But enough of me troubles. Can't wait to see how ya twist the plot...
Teepot

hey! this is a good story. i really like it. and i wounder whats gonna happen wit jack and danni. i havent read a newsie story in a while and im glad that i picked this one. it soundes like its going to be great. good luck on your other 7 stories. bye and have a good one

Yay! I liked this! It's a new story, its fresh, and it's innocent. I have no clue what's in store for Danni and Jack, and I can't wait to find out. I'm always interested in newsies stories, and this one I can tell will be great. There are just TOO many newsies stories out there so I usually put the ones I like on my favorites so I can watch for updates. Hopefully you'll update quick, despite your other million stories you're working on. good luck with this and the others and hopfeully you update quick! Quick updates are GROOVY!
-Chelsea AKA StormShadow--
"Did you tell 'im about the lizards?"