 The Original Moon Princess 2008-04-14 . chapter 12Awsome story now on to the next story which is the one after this one he |
 starz4evr 2007-12-30 . chapter 12Aww! That was such a tragic fic! But hope you update soon! |
 MoonBunny777 2007-08-20 . chapter 12Aw that was sad! I love the story you did a wonderful job! |
 MoonBunny777 2007-08-20 . chapter 11Wow that was an intense ending! Great job! |
 MoonBunny777 2007-08-20 . chapter 10Poor herro i would have a headache to! I love this story! |
 MoonBunny777 2007-08-20 . chapter 9Yeah! They know who she was!! I am so excited cant wait to see the rest! |
 MoonBunny777 2007-08-20 . chapter 8Aw so cute! I love this story so much love ahh! Great job! |
 MoonBunny777 2007-08-20 . chapter 7Aww that was sad! But i bet Serenity knows who she is! Great chapter! |
 MoonBunny777 2007-08-20 . chapter 6Aw so cute! I think i read this story before but i didnt review every chapter! Now that i have my own stories i try to review all the chapters :) I love it! |
 MoonBunny777 2007-08-20 . chapter 5Wow bittersweet chapter! Herro was so sweet! But what punishment will befall! I love the story line it is awsome! |
 MoonBunny777 2007-08-20 . chapter 4O bad boy herro lol! That was cute! Naked as a J-bird :) I like it! |
 MoonBunny777 2007-08-20 . chapter 3This is such a neat story i am really glad i took the time to read it! I love it! So cute! |
 MoonBunny777 2007-08-20 . chapter 2Intersting chapter! Did u take the rules from an old history book? It sounds like something that would have happend in the old days! |
 MoonBunny777 2007-08-20 . chapter 1Aw that chapter was so cute! I really like it! :) |
 Cheska 2005-10-26 . chapter 12That was a great Silver Millenium story. I am proud of the character development you drew from them. A few things weirded me out though, such as Trowa and Duo's placement in the story near the middle. Duo and Trowa couldn't be seen since their arrival in the Moon Kingdom, so I wondered what they were doing that whole time. Also Relena and Milliardo. They were doing business negotiations...with the Queen. But it seemed like the Queen spent more time with Serena. I guess that can be reasoned out with Relena and Milliardo not trusting the Moon Kingdom too much. However, would it not be rude to not have breakfast lunch dinner and tea time with the Queen? For the sake of having proper manners, etc. But with these things aside, I'm still happy with the story. I don't see many stories that are pleasant to read. ^_^ |