Please update this soon, I'm on pins and needles! I love the whole idea and plot, it's a great story. I'm still having trouble believing Bailey is John's father (I know it's just a story) but I'll get over it. Continue soon!!

*sobs uncontrolably for Sam and John because they're still not officially back together*.

*points an accusatory finger* You best finish this series, young lady! (...I'm one to talk...)

~Fish

*cries even more for Sam and John*.

I HATE PATRICK O'DOYLE. And while I'm at it...
I HATE JOSEPH O'DOYLE.

*sigh* I feel better now! XD :)

I like this chapter, though Patrick always seems to strike a nerve with ME! That's how good you write out their feelings :). Kudos.

~Fish

No... *cries because Sam and John are still on a break*. And yes, I will mention that for every chapter they're apart. :þ

I loved the way you ended this chapter. I'm starting to see that good ol' John come back! YAY! And it was cool how Rachel and John threw their theories in the others' faces. BUM BUM BUM!

~Fish

Normally I'd beg you to put Sam and John back together just for the sake of my sanity, but seeing as you've already finished the story, begging wouldn't really get me anywhere.

I'm scared for John. What I love about this series of fics is it's very angsty, and that's one of my fav kinds. I just like darker fics. *shrugs*.

Completely LOVED this chapter. It was grand! XD

~Fish

NO! :( *sob* They broke up?!?!
Another twist... but I don't like this one like the other one...:(

-Fish

Ooh no. That means that Patrick O'Doyle doesn't yet know that Bailey is John's father.

I love this twist!

~Fish

OH NO! Right when my mom tells me to get of the cpu, too. Now I have to wait until I find out what happens next. -_- Oh, the irony.

Amazing chapter. John did act weird... ô_o very weird... :)

-Fish

This was a sad chapter, too. It was so heartbreaking to see John so down. :(

Then again, this is what happens when you're fifteen and refuse to work on your Driver's Ed: You spend all your time reading your online friends' Profiler fics and refuse to start working on your own only because you know you're gonna have to eventually. Lol. I need mental help. Haha.

-Fish<

[ PS - I'll try and update my fic AS SOON AS POSSIBLE... but it the meantime I'm going to read yours. :) ]

:( aw poor Nathan... We just like killing him off, don't we? LOL! Sorry, that was a mean thing to say... (but funny nonetheless.) :þ

This was a great chapter; I really loved it! Poor John... Poor Sam... Poor everyone... Poor gone-to-waste sodas...

-Fish

*short review* Great chappy, must. read. next. one.

AHH! A BOMB!

-Fish

Hee hee hee; that was a cute ending to the chapter. :þ "Yeah... towels..." hee hee.

Thanks for this one, though the beginning was sad. :( Up until they found Angel at home I was REALLY worried something bad was gonna happen this chappy. :) It was a great one, though!!

-Fish

Oh no. I've got a horrible feeling! I hope Sam and Rachel know what they're doing because they're the Profilers and they both agreed to call the guards off (along with John who knows Patrick best, and George who's a genius practically).

This was a great chapter. :)

-Fish

Aha! Thought I was gone, didn't you. But nope, just busy! I loved this chapter, it was very fluffy SJR. :)

-Fish

Oh no...
Why do I have a bad feeling that this is only the beginning?
Oh.. because it is, lol. Great second chapter! I loved it.
-Fish