This was the best of your stories untill now! I will go now and read the next one, but also I hope that you will come up with "An Age Old Grudge" soon!

*gives a sigh of relief* I'm glad to see Legolas, Aragorn and Mithfalas escaped danger...for now. Excellent job on this story and I'm off to read your next one. ^_^

*gulps* By this excerpt you've given us at the bottom, it looks like Legolas is in trouble once more!:-)

Goodbye already? Hm. And there was an unanswered question? All your stories have been pretty much the same, you know, the torture, the fighting... I'm not complaining, but maybe something different should happen, just for sake of being different. Anyway, keep writing!

PS: Nice preview :)

This was an interesting story and a quick read, which is nice. I like a story that pulls me in and refuses to let go. Your next fic looks exciting, I will keep an eye open for it.

I enjoyed this story very much and your next one sounds as if it may be even better.Thank you for a great read !

hmm.. intriging snipet of the next story. It sounds like it will be yet another interesting read. What can I say, I usually cling on to things and remain curious about them when the important facts often seem to be elusive, even to the character lol.

0_o *goggles* 0_o *goggles some more*
That new story sounds so kwl! And this was a great ending. THEY SURVIVED! *does hippy hippy dance round kitchen. Mum stares on in utter disbelief*
Yeah, don't worry mum. though i DID warn you about giving me candyfloss...
NEW STORY UP VERY QUICK. YEAH? GOOD GOOD. AND YOU WILL NEED FAL COS I SAID YOU WOULD. OK?
And i like writing funny reviews. I try my best! Are they funny? *looks at previosu reviews*
I WROTE THAT!?!?! OMG...
I feel so embarressed...
~Faerlain~

*who goes and hides in faraway corner until new story arrives*

Me: *hops into the review* Waz' up!! *stops suddenly* Uh, oh.. why does my review look more like a construction site?
Miffy: *runs in carrying a huge pile of lumber* Can't talk--too busy!
Me: What are you doing?
Miffy: I told you already! Me and Dae are building BROUHAHA a shrine!
Me: I knew I shouldn't have asked.
Dae: Hey, girl! *runs in with a hammer and nails* Here, Miffy, start putting those pieces together and I'll get the roof-thingy.
Me: *sighs* When will the madness end? Anyway... hello, El! The story's done with? NO! Makes me sad... I enjoyed it so much and Dae and Miffy have made this so much fun... I guess I'll just have to wait until your next story. But guess what!! I was in a crazy mood, so I drew a picture of our dear Miffy and Dae! And I threw in BROUHAHA just for fun. (he's a midget with blue hair. How else is a separator supposed to be illustrated?) Anyway, I forgot what Miffy's hair color's supposed to be... so it became silver.

http://w.geocities.com/jazie_star/daemiff.html

Dae: And I'm the beautiful blonde.
Miffy: My hair's prettier than yours.
Dae: Is not!
Miffy: Is too!
*another fight breaks out between them*
Me: *groans* Daemir, stop it. Surely there's got to be some kind of medication he could be taking..
Dae: I... *punches Miffy* Heard that!
Miffy: *claws Dae's face* Me prettier than you! *screams* Oh, no! I chipped a nail!
Me: I'll sick Araraug on you both if you don't shut up.
Dae: *squeaks in terror* No! I'll be good I swear.
Miffy: Who's Arafog?
Dae: He's evil, Spiffy.
Miffy: Don't call me that!
Dae: Spiffy...
Miffy: Well... you're name rhymes with Fay, May, Kay, Olay and TRAY!
Dae: *unfazed and in a sarcastic tone* Oh, how will I ever live it down?
Me: Dae, don't make me call your wife to take you home.
Dae: *shirks in terror and hides behind Miffy*
Miffy: Ha! You're married.
Me: Hm... I'll just have to invent a girlfriend for you. Why not marry BROUHAHA?
Miffy: Ew...
Me: *cackles evilly*
^-^

Excellent chapter! WOO HOO I didn't have to wait for it! LOL! ;)

Oh wow...the excerpt for the new story...wow! Post it soon please! ;)

I apoligize for not reviewing in a while, but the summer had been busy and other things had happened. I like the way the story is developing, but I am curious though as to what secret Thranduil hides from Legolas in regards as to what will happen to his brother.

Me: Ff.net won't let me sign in! Is everyone having this problem or just me?
Daemir: It's just you.
Me: *glowers at him* Go away.
Daemir: *pulls out a box of tissues* I'm in the depths of despair. I can't 'go away.'
Miffy: *walks in with an armload of kleenex*
Me: *blinks* Okay, what is going on, guys?
*Miffy and Dae pull on black cloacks and sunglasses*
Me: Uh... *stares at them*
Daemir: Maybe the sunglasses are too much. *tosses them over his shoulder*
Me: I may not want to know the answer to this question... but what are you two doing?
Miffy: Keep your voice low and respectful. It's a funeral.
Me: I haven't killed you two yet! There's still one more chapter to go! Elenillor won't let me kill you yet. Though torture hasn't been discussed...
Miffy: It's not for me.
Daemir: It's for... BROUHAHA.
Me: *stunned silence* HUH?!
Miffy: *dabs his eyes with the kleenex* He was such a good separator. He was so young... only used for a few chapters.
Daemir: May he rest forever in peace.
Me: BROUHAHA?! You're mourning the loss of BROUHAHA?
Miffy: *glares at her* Quiet and respectful!
Me: *in a quiet and respectful tone* Are you two out of your minds?
Daemir: We must mourn BROUHAHA, because he was insane, got in the way of the drama of the story, had the funniesty name ever and was mere comic relief. He was truly one of us.
Miffy: Truer words never spok-hey, wait! I don't have a funny name! I'm not one of your weird group people thing-ies.
Daemir: *pats him on the back* You just have to learn to accept it. Miffy rhymes with Sniffy, Tiffy, Spiffy and Ziffy. Learn to live with the pain and you shall be free.
Me: This is just too weird.
Miffy: I DO NOT HAVE A FUNNY NAME!
Me: *watches as a fight breaks out* Ah, well. They should warn me next time they fight--it'll give me time to sell tickets.
Miffy and Daemir: WE HEARD THAT! *they go back to fighting*
Me: Anyway, El, I'm sad to hear this story's one chappie away from the end. But all things must come to an end... BROUHAHA... for example. Although only those two fools over there will sorrow over his going...
Miffy: We shall build a shrine to BROUHAHA so his memory will live on forever!
Me: Why don't you become priests and worship him, too?
Daemir: Hey, that's a good idea!
Me: *shocked* No, I was kidding... oh, here we go again!

Ach! Such suspense! It's killing me slowly, update quick! I'm really looking forward to this next (and sadly final) chappie, all these unanswered questions and hinted at suggestions are driving me crazy! Who is this lady? could it be Legolas/Mithfalas' mother? or Nifren's one-week wife? or a cross-dressing Minastir with serious rage issues? oh the agony! please UPDATE, and put me out of this horrible misery!
luv and kisses,
fallenangel(26)^.^

You're gonna kill Mithfalas?
EVIL!
Yup, kill all the ugly guys, keep all the cute ones safe, easy!
Can;t wairt for chapter 18, *bounces* I love this story *bounces some more* ^_^
~Faerlain~

Wow, poor Legolas! I can't wait for 18!

Me: I'M BACK!
*Daemir pops into view*
Daemir: *mouth drops open* OH, my god! I thought you were dead or something, Jazi!
*Miffy walks into the review*
Miffy: *stops in shock* Oh, my god! Jazi's alive?
Me: Hi, guys! Uh... why did you think I was dead?
Miffy: Well... you've been gone... FOR-EV-ER.
Me: *blushes* Oh, yeah... about that... I come back to you now at the turn of the tide.
Daemir: Don't start quoting Gandalf and thinking you're going to get out of here unscathed! WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN?
Me: Camp, where else?
Daemir: CAMP WAS DONE WITH A WEEK AGO!
Me: Well... my computer is off being upgraded right now... I barely managed to get on the net today by using a computer away from home... and then I went to visit a friend...
Miffy: Excuses, excuses.
Daemir: You spent the entire summer away from us!
Me: *bows* Sorry, guys.
Miffy: *sniffs* All right, we'll forgive you... for now at least.
Me: ^-^ Good! Well now I've taken months off... I've come back older, calmer, wiser...
Daemir: Wiser? Doubt it.
Me: *punches him* Wiser. Anyway... today is a special day! I'm finally seventeen!
Miffy: Is that supposed to be special? You're still a baby by my standards!
Daemir: A toddler, maybe.
Me: *attacks both of them* Shut up!
Daemir: Her way of showing affection is by trying to hurt us.
Me: DIE!
Miffy: I guess she really loves us then.
Me: *stops pounding them for a moment* Well, now that I'm back I can finally get back to work on "The cruelest thing." yes, you can count on a new chapter something in the near future... if I get my computer back within a week or so.
Daemir: Yay!
Miffy: She's back to stay!
Me: Yup.
Miffy: *hugs Jazi* I never thought I'd miss you... but I did. I missed your stupid/sarcastic comments.
Me: Who's stupid? DIE!
Daemir: *observes the fight between Miffy and me* It's official. She's back.