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SupportSeverusSnape 2006-07-11 . chapter 5
O_O

Poor Remus.

UPDATE MORE OF YOUR FICS!!
Mormiel 2006-07-09 . chapter 5
How sad and touching!
Very well written: I love how you wallow in deep, emotional, angsty language!
"... but since he was only five he supposed he had lots of years to see what was fun and what was not" - I knew right then that he had no more time at all to have fun in his childhood universe! Poor boy!
The ending chilled me to the bone!

I love the idea of a wizard fair, which must be truly spectacular and exciting!

Keep up the nice updates!
All the best,
Mormiel
Moonglaze 2006-07-08 . chapter 5
My poor Remus! However, that was the perfect timing for showing his first sign of magic.
PotterManiacGrl 2006-07-07 . chapter 5
::Cheers:: Yah! Another update. I really liked this one . . . Remus and the chocolate is very cute.
wizardelfgirl 2006-07-07 . chapter 5
Those two last sentences sent shivers down my spine. Oh! It was a very long wait, but totally worth it.
I hope you continue all your other stories too (I'm reading them all, already read your vampire Snape fic and I love it, will review separately later)
Droxy 2006-07-07 . chapter 5
Poor kid...

Nice update! I love this little series of short stories.
pepperimp 2006-07-07 . chapter 5
Aw, poor Remus. I'm becoming steadily addicted to these little delicious bites of the Potterverse.
pepperimp 2006-07-07 . chapter 4
That was oddly touching! The 'welcome into wizardkind' bit...aww! I can just imagine how it would be to do your first magic when you were around a wizarding family...everyone would have a special dinner (well, I imagine the Weasley's would) and they'd be the embarrassed...aww!
pepperimp 2006-07-07 . chapter 3
Yay!This fits HBP and sets the scene so well.Your writing is so pleasant, the style and structure and wording subtle and it allows the reader to really get in to the ideas and situations.
pepperimp 2006-07-07 . chapter 2
Hee hee! This is PERFECT!Love it!*gush*
pepperimp 2006-07-07 . chapter 1
Man, this is awesome! What a wonderful idea! And you've written it well which just makes my fanf-ficing night, because such an awesome idea deserves good writing.
cmwinters 2006-04-21 . chapter 3
"I can make them hurt if I want to..."

SO. FITTING.

!

Are you still planning on continuing this?
cmwinters 2006-04-21 . chapter 1
I *love love love* how you called the elder Snape "Tiberius"...his name ended up being Tobias but you couldn't very well have known that!
TheDeathChamber 2005-06-23 . chapter 4
Wonderful. Poor Snape. I loved Albus' one. Great stories.
SupportSeverusSnape 2005-04-22 . chapter 4
Aw...poor Sevvie. Damn his dad. He sould go die.

Lol...Hermione was cute! Her and her books.

Go Riddle. He's got true Slytherin power!!

-grins at Dubledore- Odd. That's exactly how I imagine him to be. Sorry to review and run but...

-Moony-

PLEASE UPDATE To Consort With The Devil! I'm dying to know what happnes!
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