sheer brilliance. I love the way you trace his (somewhat incoherent, but the effect is great nonetheless) train of thoughts, it all seems the most natural thing in the world, and his grief, explained like this, is entirely understandable. I mean, we see him as an action hero, but there's really so much more. great job, I'd love to see more of this kind of stuff!

Por Indy. I love that part when he realizes she's not dead. So sad.
I cried when I first saw that movie.

Wow, an absolutely stunning read.

I would love to read more. Keep writing.

Aw, thats sad... I always liked him with Marion... Good job!
thats me
ahhelga
aka Pauline

aw...!that was so good!! ur a great writer!

Great job. Poor Indy!

Ah yes, the aftermath to the flaming ball of truck incident as i like to call it. This is pretty cool. I read the little summary thingy and i thought...hmm, this is going to to bloody depressing, but i'll read it anyway. And i loved it! I mean, it's a little depressing, but its not like really sad depressing, it's like, glimmer of underlying hope depressing, its there's a light at the end of the tunnel depressing, it's like, HA won't he be happy and surprised to find her alive! depressing. very cool. I love it!

oh wow!! This was beautiful!