You made me cry! But it was beautiful and I loved it.

you made me cry; it was wonderfully magnanimous - the writing itself is superb and well executed as well as articulate. :) keep up the good work.

Lovely. I rarely read stories like this, short little one-offs that are just so many moments of beauty, but when I do, it's always a pleasure to find something of this calibre. My compliments.

Beautiful. I loved it!
Thanks much for sharing.
~~ stripes

a true work of art...
a masterpiece.

well, you made me cry.
it's beautiful- no other word for it. The language has a unique rhythm, indeed like a leaf drifting in the autumn wind and it carries the reader in a world of its own. The separate parts; like separate gusts of wind- they take you up and then leave you gliding for a while and then they carry you up again.
It is stories like these amongst all the stupid parodies and Mary Sues that keep me coming back to ffnet. Keep writing.
love,
coesius

oh that was a LOVELY poem. I know it was talking about Harry dying but i don't know which character was writing about it. You probably hinted about it somewhere buti didn't catch it so... never the less a gorgeous poem, almost made me cry and i don't cry to easily, only when Sirius died *tear*. well gotta go read more stories!

This story is beautiful - truly beautiful, and it frightens me.
This is not a pairing that I tend to read. This is the first SS/HP fic that I have ever read, actually, and it is amazing. Simply incredible. It is beautifully written, and so sad.
I adore this fic. Seriously. Love it.