aw great story i really enjoyed it

Good beginning, middle but not so good ending. I know Sam is a 'warrior' and whatever, but if she had a miscarriage and especially if the baby was jacks', she would have been more upset. In your story you made it sound like she was detatched and it was a bit inhuman. I mean, she lost a life for cryin out loud! LOL. Next time just give her more feeling and...and...EMOTION. But that set aside, it was an okay story.

~CoryS

Great story. I would really like to read a sequel or part 2..

Oh that was a good fic. It got a bit sad but ended so sweet. now i want to know more. *thats my way of saying write a part2* but keep up the good work!