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shariena
2009-04-17 . chapter 5
hey, you still there? :)
I´d like to inform you that I like this one and it would be really nice if you´d write more of it... so, update? :)
Laydee Innocent
2007-10-22 . chapter 5
okai i beg of yooh!
can yooh please please please pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease
update this story!! i really want to see what happens next!
please?!?!?!
rorygal2991
2007-09-22 . chapter 5
OMG write more i can't wait for the next chapter make Lynette fall in love with the captain this is awesome! *sighs* Okay, glad that's off my chest. Please write more, cause I don't think I've ever read a story I liked as much as this one. (except mine, of course *winks*) jk. this story is so cool! Love the battle scene. The power of books^-^!

-rorygal2991- (author of Jaclyn Cross on the Jolly Roger)
Ambrosine
2006-12-29 . chapter 5
Nyah- where is the rest? I love the fairy bond- hehe
FaintlyAlarming
2006-12-18 . chapter 5
I really like this fic, and would be delighted if you were to continue it. But, seeing as you haven't done anything with it for two years, I am going to assume that you are not going to. A shame really. However, despite any evidence to the contrary, I am going to put your story on Story Alert, in the wild hope that something will spur you to continue. Unless you have died. In which case, I apologize.
georgie d
2005-09-07 . chapter 5
...too lazy to sign in...
Update! Please... I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm practically ** all over myself with excitement! *JK* Ep! I can't wait!
Georgie
Celtic Cross
2005-09-03 . chapter 5
I LOVE THIS STORY! Update SOON ok? OK!:):):):):):):):)
crystal tink
2005-04-23 . chapter 5
UPDATE!
chenmo
2005-02-15 . chapter 5
I guess ,that Hook will find Lynette is a girl,right?I really want to know your idea, so please update soon!
peters pan
2004-12-18 . chapter 4
(haha thats a silly name)
update please
if u dont ill be very sad
April Thatcher
2004-12-01 . chapter 5
hey dude great story i realy love it! please update soon!
;-)
hook
2004-12-01 . chapter 1
nice
Dominique Fade
2004-11-24 . chapter 5
I love your story and I hope you update soon! The part of Lynette masquerading as a boy is quite intriguing and I can’t wait till Captain Hook finds out. What a major stab to his ego. Can’t wait!
Panny Savage
2004-10-22 . chapter 5
I love it! Brilliant!

I feel sorry for Lynette though. She has no one her age to talk to... I wonder whether she'll cope with it. That's why I'm curious of how the romance part of this story will fit in?

So confusing, that's what's got me interested!

Carry on with the great work!
melissa Ivory
2004-10-13 . chapter 5
where's the romance? and please let it be with the Captain... gotta love him, right? the most misunderstood character is always the one i love first! i have you on my alert list, so please hurry with te next chapter!
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